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MANHATTAN 模考上的一道题,求问。粘贴过来发现下划线没了,加了【】表示。

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发表于 2012-11-13 03:41:50 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
【Stymieing the Armada’s plans to meet up with the Duke of Parma’s army off the coast of Flanders in the Spanish Netherlands, the reason for the defeat of the Spanish Armada was not only due to gale winds that favored the British but also the sacrificing】 of eight war ships as “fireships,” vessels filled with pitch, brimstone, gunpowder, and tar and sent downwind toward the closely-anchored Spanish fleet.

    Stymieing the Armada’s plans to meet up with the Duke of Parma’s army off the coast of Flanders in the Spanish Netherlands, the reason for the defeat of the Spanish Armada was not only due to gale winds that favored the British but also the sacrificing

    The defeat of the Spanish Armada, which stymied the Armada’s plans to meet up with the Duke of Parma’s army off the coast of Flanders in the Spanish Netherlands, was not only due to gale winds that favored the British but also the sacrificing

    The defeat of the Spanish Armada, which stymied the Armada’s plans to meet up with the Duke of Parma’s army off the coast of Flanders in the Spanish Netherlands, was not only due to gale winds that favored the British but also due to the sacrificing

    Stymieing the Armada’s plans to meet up with the Duke of Parma’s army off the coast of Flanders in the Spanish Netherlands, the reason for the defeat of the Spanish Armada was not only gale winds that favored the British but also the sacrifice

    Stymieing the Armada’s plans to meet up with the Duke of Parma’s army off the coast of Flanders in the Spanish Netherlands, the defeat of the Spanish Armada was due not only to gale winds that favored the British but also to the sacrifice
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沙发
发表于 2012-11-13 18:29:07 | 只看该作者
先确定下。。。。。选择E不???亲。。。。
板凳
发表于 2012-11-13 18:39:34 | 只看该作者
先写自己的做法好了:
A选项:not only...but also不平行对称;stymieing的动作发出者是reason,错误
B选项:not only...but also也是同A错误;并且which修饰语过长夹在中间是十分awkward的用法,不提倡;
C选项:也是which修饰语过长夹在中间是十分awkward的用法
D选项:前面stymieing的动作发出者是reason,逻辑主语错误
E选项:当然是对滴啦

LZ可能会有which指代的疑虑,我自己的看法是,which指代没有问题,指代的是前面的N of N的这个短语,没有歧义。。。主要不选which是由于其修饰成分过长,夹在主谓之间G会直接认为awkward,相比DE的句式改法,BC选项which的使用那就out了。。。一家之言。。。open to discuss
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2012-11-18 11:37:52 | 只看该作者
先写自己的做法好了:
A选项:not only...but also不平行对称;stymieing的动作发出者是reason,错误
B选项:not only...but also也是同A错误;并且which修饰语过长夹在中间是十分awkward的用法,不提倡;
C选项:也是which修饰语过长夹在中间是十分awkward的用法
D选项:前面stymieing的动作发出者是reason,逻辑主语错误
E选项:当然是对滴啦

LZ可能会有which指代的疑虑,我自己的看法是,which指代没有问题,指代的是前面的N of N的这个短语,没有歧义。。。主要不选which是由于其修饰成分过长,夹在主谓之间G会直接认为awkward,相比DE的句式改法,BC选项which的使用那就out了。。。一家之言。。。open to discuss
-- by 会员 sisichen666 (2012/11/13 18:39:34)

没有及时回复,真不好意思。  你是对的,感谢你的分析!
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发表于 2012-11-18 11:47:45 | 只看该作者
这题模考目测我也做过

好题


sisi解释很详细
6#
 楼主| 发表于 2012-11-18 14:54:20 | 只看该作者
这题模考目测我也做过

好题


sisi解释很详细
-- by 会员 DUKB24 (2012/11/18 11:47:45)

48刀的那个?一共6套是吧
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