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agree/disagree:an efficient leader willalways try to make everyone feel that he's in part of a decision making
绿色-good,红色-有问题,蓝色-小结 Currently, leader is becomingmore and more important in every respect of our society. Their ablilities of management, especially the ability ofdecision making, determine whether they are efficient leaders. Some people argue that an efficient leader should makethe decision alone, so that the decision making will be more efficient.However, in my opinion, it is much more efficient for a leader to make everyonein the group participate in part of a decision making. The illustration is as follow.
Admittedly, leader making decision withoutcommunicating with others seems more efficient, because it appears be timesaving at first glance. (这里是转折,应该加上转折承接句或词吧)Apparently, morepeople always means more different opinions, which will lengthen the time ofdiscussion. However(前面已经说了征求他人意见会浪费时间,我觉得这个however,换到前面会更好 ), further reflection provethat the decision made by leader alone will be much harder to operate, due to most peoplein the group have no ideas about this decision and do not know how to operateit exactly. Accordingly, an efficient leader should consider the whole and attemptto make everyone in his group feel that he is a part of the decision making. Take my own experience as example, when I was a leader of my class, I once made the decision--theplace of spring trip--alone. As a result, most classmates will not take partsin this trip, so I need to plan the trip again. Apparently, this plan wastedmany of my time, and I remenber this fault till now.
Moreover, making the underlyings participate inthe decision making can enhance theirpassion to complish the task much better andmore efficient. The collegues will feel that they are so important to thecompany that they have to work much more assiduous than before. And then thiscompany will be much more competitive because of the smart leading ability ofthe efficient leader. (可以用点从句什么的,减少这么多短句)
To conclude, an efficient leader should persuadehis co-workers to take active parts in the decision making. For one thing,making the decision together can make the decision much easier to operate. Foranother thing, the co-workers will work much more assiduous if they feel theyplay an essential role in his company, helping the company to be competitive. (结尾在重述一下观点,挺好的,但是我觉得重述时候要注意不能跟前面的表达相同,要不就起反效果了) 我的作文跑题了,见谅啊~~ |
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