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Twe139: What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? Why is this room more important to you than any other room? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

The issue of what is the most important room in a house is a controversial one. When facing this question, different people will present different answers depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern. Some people claim that kitchen room is the most important one for the reason that they can cook delicious food in it. Others, however, may choose the studying room instead. As far as I am concerned, I think that the most important room in a house should be the living room. My reasons are presented as follows.

To begin with, living room is an ideal place for a person to reduce stress and refresh energy at home. Nowadays, due to the fierce competition in the society, people have to work very hard in order to get more achievements. After a whole day’s hard working, they usually become tired and exhausted. However, living room rightly provides people with a good place to get relaxation. In a living room, a person could listen to some light music, to watch interesting TV programs or to read the newspapers lying in sofa. Through these activities, he would substantially reduce the stress and pressures and be well prepared for tomorrow’s work by achieving refreshment and energy.

Next, a person often communicates with other family members or friends in a living room. Universally, living room is the central area in a house and all family members tend to gather together there after dinner to proceed some specific family behaviors, such as watching a fancy movie, playing a chess game or having a heart-to-heart conversation. Not matter what they do, one thing is certain: they can enjoy more happiness and strengthen the strong tie between them. Moreover, when several friends of a family are coming to have a visit, they are always entertained in the living room by holding a small party or doing some interesting games. At such a place, people could sense the warm atmosphere and promote the communication each other.

In addition, a person could do physical exercise in a living room. Owning a strong body is very important for a person to pursue a long career goal and live a better life. In the daily life, people have not enough time to go to the gyms to play sport games. Nevertheless, at home, they could utilize the living room which is usually more spacious than other rooms to do simple and beneficial exercise. For example, a person could stretch his arms and legs every morning after he gets out of bed, or do the magic yoga. Such activities would not only keep a person in a good physical station, but a healthy mental station as well.

To sum up, although there are some others rooms that are vital to people, such as bed room or kitchen room, the living room is the most important one for it could provide people with a good place to relax, to communicate and to do physical exercise. From what have been discussed, it is safe to draw the conclusion that the living room is the most important room in a house.

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几天没接着写，手又生了很多。这篇基本是按时间写的，自己又修改了一下，各位ＮＮ帮忙，多谢！

Twe139: What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? Why is this room more important to you than any other room? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

The issue of what is the most important room in a house is a controversial one. When facing this question, different people will present different answers depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern. Some people claim that kitchen room is the most important one(,) for the reason that they can cook delicious food in it. Others, however, may choose the studying room instead. As far as I am concerned, I think that the most important room in a house should be the living room. My reasons are presented as follows.

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To begin with, living room is an ideal place for a person to reduce stress and refresh energy at home. (good topic sentence)Nowadays, due to the fierce competition in the society, people have to work very hard in order to obtain get more achievements. After a whole day’s hard working, they usually become tired and exhausted. However, living room rightly provides people with a good place to relax get relaxation. In a living room, a person could listen to some light music, to watch interesting TV programs (,)or to read the newspapers lying in sofa. Through these activities, he would substantially reduce the stress and pressures and be well prepared for tomorrow’s work by achieving refreshment and energy.

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Next, a person often communicates with other family members or friends in a living room. many social acitivities such as the meeting between familiy members or friends are held in a living room. Universally, living room is the central area in a house and all family members tend to gather together there after dinner to proceed some specific family behaviors, such as watching a fancy movie, playing a chess game or having a heart-to-heart conversation. Not matter what they do, one thing is certain: they can enjoy more happiness and strengthen the strong tie between them. Moreover, when several friends of a family are coming come to have a visit, they are always entertained in the living room by holding a small party or doing some interesting games. At such a place, people could sense the warm atmosphere and promote the communication each other.(good conclusion sentence)

In addition, a person could do physical exercise in a living room. Owning a strong body is very important for a person to pursue a long career goal and live a better life. In the daily life, people have not enough time to go to the gyms to play sport games.(awkward) Nevertheless, at home, they could utilize the living room which is usually more spacious than other rooms to do simple but and beneficial exercise. For example, a person could stretch his arms and legs every morning after he gets out of bed, or do the magic yoga. Such activities would not only keep a person in a good physical station, but a healthy mental station as well.

To sum up, although there are some others rooms that are vital to people, such as bed room or kitchen room, the living room is the most important one for it could provide people with a good place to relax, to communicate and to do physical exercise. From what have been discussed, it is safe to draw the conclusion that the living room is the most important room in a house.

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