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发表于 2012-5-21 18:09:46 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
题目:Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.
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The issue of whether telling the truth is the most important consideration is a complex and controversial one. There are certain factors that everyone should takes into account in relationship, such as honesty, altruism, being respect etc.

However, many people would like to ask themselves: For the above-mentioned factors or characteristics, which one is the most important case. Different people hold different views owe to their respective angles. Before giving my opinion, it is important to look at the arguments on the both sides.
Some people may think the answer is honesty, always be honest to your parents, to your friends, and to your leaders; others perhaps insist that in some special circumstances, we really need to tell some lies, which are called the “white lies”.

For my part, I agree with the former opinion for the following reasons.

First of all, when we go to the future job markets, we usually want to know what is the most important point in the interview, I believe that most of your teachers may advice your: be honest . It is not wise to tell lies in your resume just for embellishing your experience, when interviewees find out that, he or she thinks you mush have hidden some bad aspects or just afraid of showing your real aspect, and the result is obvious.

In addition, in any relationship of mime, I would like to prefer honesty. I hope the person I’m dealing with is honest. Some friends of mine tell me that they just tell me  some “white lies”, they don’t want to hurt me if they tell the truth. I always respond directly: It’s nothing, compare with the white lies, I choose the truth.” If I have done something wrong, and my friend just tell other guys but not me, when I find out later, I would be much more unpleasant with that behavior. And for the next time, I should ask myself: can I believe what you just said ? In this case, it is harmful to our relationship.

And finally, it is also very important to tell truth in the marriage. Here I think I can use a popular saying:” I love you not because of who you are, but because of your are the person I can believe forever.” My mothers always tells me under the table:” You know, your father is most ugliest man I ever met, but also the person I can believe and rely on .”  They have been together for more than 20 years.

To sum up, for the above-mentioned reasons, I would like to state that, among many considerations, I concern the honesty most, it is a really important consideration in a relationship.
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