【写作小分队】526托福各位NN请狠狠的拍砖啊~~~

IVY500 · 发表于 2012-5-8 23:30:17

各位走过路过的大牛牛啊~请拍砖啊~多多益善啊~不能学徐志摩啊

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should choose the same career as their parents. Use specific examples to support your answer.

Have you ever found that some young adults argue with his parents about his career? Have you ever found that most of us want to do just what we like? Or have you ever unwittingly found that some children hate jobs of their parents?
In my philosophy, I would without hesitation to disagree with the point that children should take the same job as their parents.

To begin with, some people, after graduating, always tend to find jobs what they interested in. There is no doubt to say that interest plays an important role in determining jobs. Take Li Cheng, my best friend since I was 7 years old, for an example, he now works as a doctor, the same career as his parents. But he does not like this job, he always complained with me about what happened in the hospital. Rich as he is, he never feels very happy. Therefore, I think interest is more important than the decision of their parents.

Secondly, people’s careers are closely related to what they learned at the university. We spend so much time at major. We would waste a lot of time if we choose the career that has no related to what we learned. According a survey on the internet, nearly 80% people are inclined to jobs what they learned previously. Consequently, it is unwise to make children to follow their parents’ career.

What is more, children should find jobs that suit them. Different people have divergent backgrounds and different charactics even though parents and their children. So, everyone should take a proper job according to his or her own charactics.

By and large, as the reasons listed above, children should consider divergent things, such as their interesting, charactics and so on, on deciding their own careers.

IVY500 · 发表于 2012-5-9 23:20:25

5.9日~再来一篇~大NN过来请拍砖啊~不要眼下留情啊~~~~
As the old saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed. Have you ever without hesitation to help your friend when he or she in a dilemma? Have you ever found that helping friends may enhance relationships between you and your friends? If so, I, in my mind, prefer to your friend to ask you for help.

To begin with, helping our friend enable us have a better standing on what we learned well. By repeating some knowledge we learned at class, we can find what we previously did not know. Take Wang Yang, my senior high school student, for example, he is good at math. I always have no idea how to deal with some math problems. So I am inclined to turn to him for help. He told me that after answering the question I asked, he had a better standing about math. Therefore, I prefer to our friend to ask we for help.

What is more, the reason why I am inclined to our friend asking we for help is that it can enhance our relationships when we working together. We worked together, shared each other’s opinion, and had fun all the time. There is no doubt that our relations will improve a lot. It pays to help our friends with some problems. So, I think helping our friends can make me better.

Admittedly, it may be true that helping for a tutor makes sense, in some conditions. However, this alone does not constitute a sufficient support to claim that it is a better for your friend ask you for help. Take me for example, one day, I had some questions to ask for help. I found all the places that I could find, however, I could not find him. So, I turned to my friend for help. Consequently, asking for friends for help is a better method.

By and large, when taking into account all these merits, I am comfortable to say that it is better for your friend to ask you for help.

IVY500 · 发表于 2012-5-10 12:11:21

TPO10 综合
The reading passage raises the claims that pollutions cause the number of the otters declined. However, this statement is strongly questioned by the lecture which provides drastically different evidences and argues that predation is the mainly reason the number of the otters decling.

The professor begins by pointing out that the number of died otters has not found on the coast of the Alaskan, which finds that the otters actually disappeared because of predators hunting. This evidence disagrees with the standpoint that there are some pollution material has been found on the ocean of the Alaskan, as demonstrated in the reading passage.

Then the professor goes on to maintain that with the number of whale hunting by human increased, orcas are inclined to have some small mammals. According to the reading passage, however, the number of some other mammals, except otter, also declined. Therefore, the lecture goes against/ strengthens what is presented in the reading passage.

Finally, the professor states that the uneven pattern of otter decline is explained by the orca predation theory. This point of view also casts doubt on/ is consistent with the contents of the reading passage, which considers that ocean currents or other environmental factors may cause uneven concentrations of pollution.

夏雨霏霏 · 发表于 2012-5-11 20:11:12

The reading passage raises the claims that pollutions cause the number of the otters declined. However, this statement is strongly questioned by the lecture， which provides drastically different evidences and argues that predation is the mainly reason the number of the otters decling.（，很重要啊，要不argues是this statement了）

The professor begins by pointing out that the number of died otters has not found（the died bodies of sea otters have） on the coast of the Alaskan, which finds that the otters actually disappeared because of predators hunting. This evidence disagrees with the standpoint that there are some pollution material has been found on the ocean of the Alaskan, as demonstrated in the reading passage.(是pollution导致死亡跟material没太大关系把)

Then the professor goes on to maintain that with the number of whale hunting） by human increased, orcas are inclined to have some small mammals. According to the reading passage, however, the number of some other mammals, except otter, also declined. Therefore, the lecture goes against/ strengthens what is presented in the reading passage.（点出来）

Finally, the professor states that the uneven pattern of otter decline is explained by the orca predation theory. This point of view also casts doubt on/ is consistent with the contents of the reading passage, which considers that ocean currents or other environmental factors may cause uneven concentrations of pollution.

夏雨霏霏 · 发表于 2012-5-11 20:17:12

To begin with, helping our friend enable us have a better standing on what we learned well. By repeating some knowledge we learned at class, we can find what we previously did not know. Take Wang Yang, my senior high school student, （classmate）for example, he is good at math（不是一句话）. I always have no idea how to deal with some math problems. So I am inclined to turn to him for help. He told me that after answering the question I asked, he had a better standing about math. Therefore, I prefer to our friend to ask we for help.（to ask our friends for help）

What is more, the reason why I am inclined to our friend asking we for help is that it can enhance our relationships when we working together. We worked together, shared each other’s opinion, and had fun all the time. There is no doubt that our relations will improve a lot. It pays to help our friends with some problems. So, I think helping our friends can make me better.

Admittedly, it may be true that helping for a tutor makes sense, in some conditions. However, this alone does not constitute a sufficient support to claim that it is a better for your friend ask you for help. Take me for example, one day, I had some questions to ask for help. I found all the places that I could find, however, I could not find him. So, I turned to my friend for help. Consequently, asking for friends for help is a better method.

By and large, when taking into account all these merits, I am comfortable to say that it is better for your friend to ask you for help.

跑了，是要证明朋友问你比问tutor 强，所以，要点处朋友问你的好处

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