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TWE_134, 各位大大帮我看看吧~~HEHE

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楼主
发表于 2004-8-16 01:21:00 | 只看该作者

TWE_134, 各位大大帮我看看吧~~HEHE



肺话: 两天没上来, 一上来就看到SALLYSY32290, pumpkin



293,的高分,顿时大受刺激~~,还有20天就要考拉~~也希望一炮打响吧~~






TOPIC 134: Do u agree /disagree? Children should be required to help with household tasks as soon as they are able to do so.






With coming of some so-called new conception of education, “housework education” looms up in our society. Then children in increasing numbers are forced with dishcloths or besoms by their parents. It is true that some cleaning or washing tasks could improve the living-capabilities of children in some way; However, is it necessary to do those tough housework when kids are just 7 or 8 years old?






The first reason that came to my mind is for children, the knowledge from books or TV bring more fruits than housework. Books, the source of human’s intelligence, is an open-ended and all-inclusive mentor who lead children absorb knowledge like sponge. Meanwhile, television, one of the greatest inventions in 20th century, offer a direct and easy-understanding way for children to study. For example, when I was 7 years old, a TV program, “ten thousand questions”, like a key, inspired my desire of knowledge and erected my dream----become a physicist.






The second reason that can not be ignored is compared spending time in doing household tasks, playing games is a more rational and effective choice for children. Games are simplified models of the real life in the society. Most rules governing a social life are highlighted in games. Games, an attractive, firendly, and patient teacher, unconsciously helps young citizens build up their characters---perservance, carefulness, courgae, confidence, and gives them a lot of useful advice when they are devouring the time.





Beyond these obvious reasons, there lies an in-depth reason that some household tasks such as washing dishes or cleaning the windows may have chances to injure immature kids.






According to the above-mentioned discussion, It is easy to draw the conclusion that for children, instead of holding housework, spending more time to absorb knowledge or play games  is much more reasonable and rational.






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沙发
发表于 2004-8-16 09:28:00 | 只看该作者

先报个道,稍后再看

板凳
发表于 2004-8-16 12:00:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用legendend在2004-8-16 1:21:00的发言:










With coming of some so-called new conception of education, “housework education” looms up in our society(意思很好,但表达重复不清,with the rapid development of society, a new concept so-called "housework education" looms up). Then children in increasing numbers are forced with dishcloths or besoms by their parents(there is a increasing number of children who are forced...). It is true that some cleaning or washing tasks could improve the living-capabilities of children in some way; However, is it necessary to do those tough housework when kids are just 7 or 8 years old?(观点句最好用肯定句,it is not necessary for children to...when they are just...)







The first reason that came to my mind is for children, the knowledge (learning)from books or TV bring more fruits (is more fruitful for children )than housework. Books, the source of human’s intelligence, is an open-ended and all-inclusive mentor who lead children absorb knowledge like sponge. Meanwhile, television, one of the greatest inventions in 20th century, offer(offers) a direct and easy-understanding way for children to study. For example, when I was 7 years old, a TV program, “ten thousand questions”, like a key, inspired my desire of (for)knowledge and erected my dream----(to)become a physicist.







The second reason that can not be ignored is compared (with)spending time in doing household tasks, playing games is a more rational and effective choice for children. Games are simplified models of the real life in the society. Most rules governing a social life are highlighted in games. Games, an attractive, firendly, and patient teacher, unconsciously helps (help)young citizens build up their characters---perservance, carefulness, courgae, confidence, and gives (give)them a lot of useful advice when they are devouring the time.  偶钟意这段!






Beyond these obvious reasons, there lies an in-depth reason that some household tasks such as washing dishes or cleaning the windows may have chances to injure immature kids.







According to the above-mentioned discussion, It is easy to draw the conclusion that for children, instead of holding housework, spending more time to absorb knowledge or play games  is much more reasonable and rational.(spending more time to..., instead of holding..., is much more ...)







                          祝MM杀T成功!!

地板
 楼主| 发表于 2004-8-16 12:48:00 | 只看该作者

首先,有一个很原则的问题, 偶不是MM啊~~~偶的PIC也不是MM啊~~虽然看上去蛮可爱的~~~

当然,还是要谢谢PENGSTONE 的修改地~~~~HOHO(其实,这篇写的时候有点卡,好不容易挤出来的,看来还要努力啊~~)

5#
发表于 2004-8-16 12:51:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用legendend在2004-8-16 12:48:00的发言:

首先,有一个很原则的问题, 偶不是MM啊~~~偶的PIC也不是MM啊~~虽然看上去蛮可爱的~~~


这个偶不是故意的,实在是GG的图像太可爱了,SORRY!

6#
发表于 2004-8-17 00:10:00 | 只看该作者

^_^ 笑死逵逵了,幸好俺的名字比较别致,不然以前使粉色字估计也会~

好像大家都比较可爱的说~

不过这几天每天逵逵要说100句脏话,以排遣心中压抑~

7#
 楼主| 发表于 2004-8-17 07:38:00 | 只看该作者

4242, 好象偶的结尾一般都写不多~~

结尾是不是也一定要写的出彩呢?~~~

8#
发表于 2004-8-17 19:50:00 | 只看该作者
最好是虎头bao尾
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