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[作文互改] As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of hum

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发表于 2011-12-20 13:15:41 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surly deteriorate.

In the era of rapidly social development and technological advancement, many different kinds of technological products, especially hi-tech products and Artificial Intelligence(AI), gradually creep into our lives during the past century. Admittedly, the wild usage of technology does have, to a certain extent, detrimental effects on our humans. However, technology like AI is still an acolyte we human manufactured for the solution of complicated specifics of problems .

It is no doubt that, even if the occurrence and utilization of technology offers people lots of convenience, these aides have created adverse circumstances for human thoughts. In modern times, people have realized some impacts on our elementary ability by means of research. For example, in a recent study conducted by Jiangsu University, researchers divided 100 children, whose other conditions are almost same, under 16 into two groups for contrast, They found that the group which used calculator frequently possessed a more weak ability of mental arithmetic than another group. The disservices as this exist in some aspects of our life. Nevertheless, we cannot deny that these technology are still, as the prolongation of people's hands, dominated by human.

As most people deem, technology is less a main cause of the impairment of human ability than tellingly ancillary tools which has been spread for almost all sorts of society. In fact, whatever function technology play on modern society, human predominate, mastering thoughts. Computer, for instance, has been regarded as one of the most significant technology up to now. Designed by human, computer can figure out a large amount of specifics, without an independent mind that we have, in spite of possessing strong AI. This will trigger little deleterious on the ability of human thinking. During the past century, technology including AI has prevailed in people's life, without rendering inevitable detriments to us. On the contrary, they sweep lots of tickles thwarting our thorough specialization.

Technology, especially AI programs, play a fundamental role we cannot underplay in many parts of our society, such as industry, research, physic and so forth.

No matter how they have influence on these essentials, they, unexceptionably, have been largely promoting the development of society. In the majority of industrial factory, pipelining of machines enhance the productivity; that's also happened in pharmaceutical manufacturing. Besides, AI programs human contrives has been exerted in administering traffic and machines that operate surgery. Consequently, technology under control could finish a great deal of works, which human cannot tackle resulting from limitation, and leave little scathe.

To sum up, due to the above mentioned reasons, we may be sound to say that, it is totally feasible that technology could help us a lot with less impair to the ability to human thinking. Without technology, our society might not upgrade a little. Hence, even though existence of tampering, independent mind is still in control of people. Moreover, the ability to thinking has been enhanced.
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沙发
发表于 2011-12-21 10:40:30 | 只看该作者
题目是,人类依靠新的技术来解决问题,这样人类自己的思考能力会退化。

In the era of rapidly social development and technological advancement, many different kinds of technological products, especially hi-tech products and Artificial Intelligence(AI), gradually creep into our lives during the past century. Admittedly, the wild usage of technology does have, to a certain extent, detrimental effects on our humans. However, technology like AI is still an acolyte we human manufactured for the solution of complicated specifics of problems .

作者这段最后一句话的意思是:然而,AI这样的技术还是人类生产出来用来帮助解决复杂的特殊问题的。。。

我感觉作者没有catch到点上,或者在论证上让别人觉得有点跑题的感觉。
板凳
发表于 2011-12-21 12:53:51 | 只看该作者
In modern times, people have realized some impacts on our elementary ability by means of research.


我感觉这句话得换一下,这个与你第一段的逻辑有点不符合。最好应该说人们发现这个科技对人是有害的,然后再举了个例子来证实,这样逻辑才完整。说人们意识到,貌似和后面的例子没有太大的联系。






This will trigger little deleterious on the ability of human thinking.
可视化
突然提这个有些突兀,说着她的好突然说她有些不好,貌似会减弱说她好的力度。


就拍两点吧·
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2011-12-21 13:42:54 | 只看该作者
谢谢楼上的几位,希望更多人给出意见!
5#
发表于 2011-12-21 13:53:54 | 只看该作者
真的需要多提意见,这样的作文上去肯定很惨。。。
6#
发表于 2011-12-21 14:43:50 | 只看该作者
我不会拍,所以来使劲顶一下!大家积极互拍吧!!!
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