ChaseDream
搜索
返回列表 发新帖
查看: 1016|回复: 0
打印 上一主题 下一主题

求批改 feb 11 的 essay

[复制链接]
跳转到指定楼层
楼主
发表于 2013-2-12 12:19:03 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
Doyou agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students should not take part-time jobs while they are attendinguniversity.
Some people preferto taking part-time jobs while they are attending because they want to particlethemselves  or make money to pay their tuition. However, I believe that student shouldnot take part time job when they are in school because students have to  accomplish a large number of assignments inuniversity. Besides, part- time jobs will make student too tired to attendcourses.
First of all, studentshave to face a lot of assignments and reports in university than in highschool. If students could not finish their paper , they may not pass thecourse. This is different than in high school study. For example, one of myfriend –Li, his is a smart boy in the school, but he took part-time job in a restaurantnearby school. Li delivery dinner to student’s apartment after classes ended.Therefore, he was so busy to finish his assignments on time and missed three groupdiscuses in the night. In addition, even the professor remind him that heshould focus on the school study, he insisted to delivery dinner in night. As aresult, Li got D in the end of the semester, even though he got A in mid-termand final exam. What is the student’s responsible?  eople know this answer.
Secondly, ifstudents take part-time job, they have to run busy  between the school and workshop place. Theywaste a lot of time in the road. Thus, some of them get tired to attend course,and they skip these courses to have a sleep. Moreover, some classmates sleepduring the classes after a whole night work because they have courses in thedaytime. Students have not time to attend other activities, such as sportclubs, learning center, and so on. Furthermore hey have their whole life towork after they graduate, so they should gain more knowledge in university-their final school.
For all thesereasons, some people say that this is a challenge that student should have toface. However,  I insist that studentshould not take part-time job while they are in school. The major goal forstudent is studying hard. If they want to work, they can direct  find a job after high school. Why they go touniversity?
收藏收藏 收藏收藏
您需要登录后才可以回帖 登录 | 立即注册

Mark一下! 看一下! 顶楼主! 感谢分享! 快速回复:

所属分类: TOEFL / IELTS

近期活动

正在浏览此版块的会员 ()

手机版|ChaseDream|GMT+8, 2024-6-3 01:36
京公网安备11010202008513号 京ICP证101109号 京ICP备12012021号

ChaseDream 论坛

© 2003-2023 ChaseDream.com. All Rights Reserved.

返回顶部