19. While depressed property values can hurt some large investors,they are potentially devastating for homeowners, whose equity-in many cases representing a life’s savings-can plunge or even disappear. (A) they are potentially devastating for homeowners,whose (B) they can potentially devastate homeowners in that their (C) for homeowners they are potentially devastating,because their (D) for homeowners,it is potentially devastating in that their (E) it can potentially devastate homeowners,whose Rhetorical construction +Agreement This sentence is correct and concise.They clearly refers to property values,and whose refers to homeowners. A Correct.The relationship between nouns and pronouns is correct in this sentence;the expression is concise and clear. B Can potentially is redundant;in that there is wordy, awkward,and ambiguous. C Their appears to refer to they(property values) rather than to homeowners. D It does not agree with property values;in that their is wordy and awkward. E It does not agree with property values;can potentially is redundant. The correct answer is A. 我错选了B,难道can和potentially重复了吗?不觉得重复啊. in that是because的意思也没有错啊,除非in that不能用在书面语中? 如果说their可能会被认为指代不清的话,题干while values can hurt investeros,they...里的they也有对应的两个复数名词啊 总之,不懂了,向牛牛们请教 22. In recent years cattle breeders have increasingly used crossbreeding,in part that their steers should acquire certain characteristics and partly because crossbreeding is said to provide hybrid vigor (A) in part that their steers should acquire certain characteristics (B) in part for the acquisition of certain characteristics in their steers (C) partly because of their steers acquiring certain characteristics (D) partly because certain characteristics should be acquired by their steers (E) partly to acquire certain characteristics in their steers Parallelism + Rhetorical construction The sentence gives two reasons that cattle breeders use crossbreeding;these reasons should be introduced in parallel ways with the word partly.The infinitive to acquire clearly and concisely conveys the purpose of the crossbreeding. A In part should be partly;use of relative clause is ungrammatical. B In part should be partly;wordy and awkward use of prepositional phrases. C Because of suggests that crossbreeding has occurred because the steers have already acquired certain characteristics. D Passive voice should be acquired by is awkward and illogical. E Correct.In this sentence,the word partly is used to introduce both reasons;the phrase to acquire certain characteristics is clear and concise. The correct answer is E. 我错选了D,是因为我觉得并列句连接的两个分句结构应该相似,难道是因为主动时态原则要比结构一致原则优先考虑吗? |