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发表于 2011-3-25 08:56:41 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
写作神马的都很菜。。
望高手伸出援手。。
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Government supports art museums and music performance or recreational facilities.

When faced with the question whether government should support art museums and music performance or recreational facilities, quite a few would claim that entertaining services should be built first. But others, by contrast, deems it is not true and that is also my point. This quite different view is based on the propensity of following points.

First and foremost reason to claim that government should support art museum and music performance is that they are beneficial to the young generation. A recent report shows that the sense of aesthetics are built majority at the age of teenage.
It is difficult to improve when they grow up. As we all know, primary schools and high schools often organize students to visit art museums and take part in the music performances. It is especially essential to invest more currency to renew the exhibits in museum and invent more celebrated orchestras to perform. This measure will help to broad the younkers’ view and widen their minds.

Furthermore, recreational facilities may waste teenagers’ time. An increasing number of parents reflect in a survey that their children take more time in watching films, playing games online and singing in the KTV than reading books. The entertainment places lead the children lacked of self-control addicted to.

Last but not least, building famous art museums may attacked tourists who love art to come to the country. As we all know, art is no boundary. Supporting the art museums and music performances could protect not only the physical cultural heritages but also intangible cultural heritages. This is not contributed to citizens of one country but for the whole human beings in the word.

Admittedly, there are still people thought government should support the recreational facilities to help nation ease pressure from working. But at some token, an growing number of people could relax themselves when enjoying music performance or visiting an excellent display in the museum.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-3-25 09:17:25 | 只看该作者
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