GWD-1-34 搜索过，还是不明白，并列比较问题求教~！

5cheng · 发表于 2010-11-21 11:21:19

222.(GWD-1-Q34)
Although people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their death rates from heart disease are far lower in France.

A.people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their

B.people in France and the United States consume fatty foods at about the same rate, the

C.fatty foods are consumed by people in France at a comparable rate to the United States's, their

D.the rate of fatty foods consumed in France and the United States is about the same, the(B)

E.the rate of people consuming fatty foods is about the same in France and the United States, the
我的问题在于，比较，纠结了好几天，马上要考试了，现在属于一种因为知识杂在一起，而会去想很多的阶段
b项，我排除他的原因在于我认为应该是 people in france and those in US consume fatty foods
要是之前做这个题目，我是首选b的，但是第二遍做的时候就选了c，因为觉得people和 us's 是可以并列的，看了帖子后发现compareble to 比较的是rate和us‘s，明白了d项的错误
但是b项我始终不能说服自己，这种修饰词的比较，介词是省略呢还是要加上，这个让我很纠结

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Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.

A.Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win

B.She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and novelist Selma Lagerlöf in 1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won

C.Selma Lagerlöf was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and in 1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning

D.A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlöf became in 1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win(D)

E.As a novelist, Selma Lagerlöf turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won

我也选的是d，但是就是在想这个first woman and also the first swedish writer的问题，and的并列到底是看语义还是看结构，名词的话是一定要和and之前的名词紧跟修饰吗？

还有一例题

In Scotland, the number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting, by pollution, and by various other threats to the fish’s habitat.

A.number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,

B.number of wild salmon is reduced because deep-sea and coastal netting is not controlled,

C.numbers of wild salmon has been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,

D.wild salmon’s numbers are reduced by deep-sea and coastal netting that is not controlled,(E)

wild salmon’s numbers have been reduced by uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
这里面主要是逗号的问题，是不是如果没有逗号，那么by pollution就是修饰的uncontrolled 那部分呢（不考虑逻辑，光讲语法来说）

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5cheng · 发表于 2010-11-21 11:58:24

up up up~~~~~~

s2206001 · 发表于 2010-11-21 12:22:18

第一题
A，at a rate comparable to the United States比较对象不合理，相信不会有问题。
C，at a comparable rate to the United States's, their中因为前面没有所属关系存在，使得这里的所有格含义模糊，不知道省略的是什么，而且their的指代也有争议。
D，the rate of fatty foods consumed不知道consumed修饰的是rate还是foods，错误。
E，the rate of people consuming和D是同样的问题。
对于你一直困惑的介词省略问题，我想加上是最好的，但是省略后如果不影响理解的话，就正确。

对于你后面的几道题题目，我没太理解你问的，你不要去设想改变题目后的是什么情况，没有必要。作对就行了。祝你考好！

yanyan7910 · 发表于 2010-11-21 12:22:31

题3 In Scotland, the wild salmon’s numbers have been reduced by uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,by pollution, and by various other threats to the fish’s habitat.
中3个by并列，都是修饰主语wild salmon's numbers，讲3个数字减少的原因。

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