OG12 108没人问过

飞行2010 · 发表于 2010-1-30 16:55:32

108. authoritative parents are more likely than permissive parents to have children who as adolescents are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.

C.children whose parents are authoritative rather than being permissive, are more likely to have self-confidence, and be responsibly independent when they are an adolescent.

我选的是C,答案是A.我觉得C直接说孩子的什么什么东西会更好。请大牛指点。谢谢。

bioalwayshuo · 发表于 2010-1-30 23:36:16

being permissive对我而言是个硬伤。are前的逗号没有必要吧。be responsibly independent中为什么用be呢？而且C的句子中心发生了转移，由家长为主体，变为了孩子为主体。C的问题太多了啊。

Jasonhere · 发表于 2010-3-10 22:34:50

不定式的to要省就一起省(除了第一个),不然每一个都要有

C中，...are the more likely to be self-confi dent, （to）have a high self-esteem, and to
be responsibly independent as adolescents

缺少了括号中的to

Jasonhere · 发表于 2010-3-10 22:35:57

发重复了，编辑掉

kunhou · 发表于 2010-3-11 13:35:30

支持一楼，c选项的问题不少。
children whose parents are authoritative rather than being permissive, are more likely to have self-confidence, and be responsibly independent when they are an adolescent.
rather than这个说法在这儿用的时候，后面的部分应该和前面的authoritative并列。其次，整个句子看起来，比a罗嗦许多。

venus2elva · 发表于 2010-3-11 20:08:19

C主语改变了，句子中心改变，而且很罗嗦。

JayNicholas · 发表于 2010-3-11 22:08:00

LZ能方便把全题都贴出来么汗。。。

Eileenl · 发表于 2010-3-12 20:18:47

permissive 前的being貌似也没必要吧

EmmaWangNJU · 发表于 2010-3-13 12:43:22

樓主選的答案，第一眼看到“when they are an adolescent.” 就直接排除好了。。。

fansail · 发表于 2010-9-27 09:47:28

Children of authoritative parents, rather than permissive parents
变成了孩子和父母比较
可能要改成children of AP, rather than of PP

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