AA 52 求助

bloodvampire · 发表于 2010-9-19 06:35:59

The following editorial appeared in the Elm City paper.
“The construction last year of a shopping mall in downtown Oak City was a mistake. Since the mall has opened, a number of local businesses have closed, and the downtown area suffers from an acute parking shortage, and arrests for crime and vagrancy have increased in the nearby Oak City Park. Elm City should pay attention to the example of the Oak City mall and deny the application to build a shopping mall in Elm City.”

就要准备考试了~~ 今天看到这道作文题，都没什么思路啊。。之找到了一个论点
1. local business的关门不一定是开mall造成的~ 可以有其他原因。
觉得后面的话也是可攻击的，但不知道从什么方面去讨论它~~
还请大家帮帮忙啊！！！！！

andreasyang · 发表于 2010-9-19 15:18:02

1.The author attributes the failure of local businesses to the construction of the shopping mall.Others factors,such as economic recession,fierce competition and inefficient management may give rise to the close of these local businiess.
2.The author fails to establish a causal relationship between the opening of the shopping mall and the acute parking shortage,increased crime rate and vagrancy.Acute parking shortage may ascribed to the fact that more and more local people bought autos last year.And the passage and enforcement a stricter law may result in the increased arrests for crime.Moreover,an economic downturn may possibly cause the vagrancy to increase.
3.The huge discrepancy between Oak city and Elm city far outweigh the similarities.Even we supposed that the construction of a shopping mall in oak city was a failure,it does not necessarily guarantee the a shopping mall opened in elm city would also end up with dissapointment.

bloodvampire · 发表于 2010-9-19 21:48:34

多谢多谢！！！！！！！！！

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