In 1713, Alexander Pope began his translation of the lliad, a work that, taking him seven years until completion, and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope's contemporary, pronounced the greatest translation in any language. A.his translation of the lliad, a work that, taking him seven years until completion, and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope's contemporary, pronounced B.his translation of the lliad, a work that took him seven years to complete and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope's contemporary, pronounced C.his translation of the lliad, a work that had taken seven years to complete and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope's contemporary, pronounced it as D.translating the lliad, a work that took seven years until completion and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope's contemporary, pronounced it as E.translating the lliad, a work that had taken seven years to complete and literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope's contemporary, pronounced it
(A) taking him seven years until completion做了插入语，使得a work that后面的that从句没有主干内容；take sb. some time until completion中，completion的动作发出者不明。 (B) Correct；sth. that sb. pronounce sth.中pronounce的宾语that已经前置，同时也说明了定语从句先行词在定从中做宾语，在考虑平行、无歧义的情况下，有时需要补出关系代词。 (C) 使用过去完成时态错误，过去完成时表达了had taken发生在began以前："书在开始翻以前就被翻译好了"，很荒谬；take seven years to complete中take后面省略宾语him使得谁在complete不清楚，好像是指所有人；pronounce it as …it多余，且固定搭配错误，pronounce sb/sth sth中没有as。 (D) a work变成了同位修饰the Iliad，而不是the translation，错误；take后面省略宾语him使得谁在complete不清楚；until completion将take与complete的关系割裂，造成completion的动作发出者不明，同时使得前面take seven years没有意义；pronounce it as …it多余，且固定搭配错误，pronounce sb/sth sth中没有as。 (E) a work变成了同位修饰the Iliad，而不是the translation，错误；使用过去完成时态错误，过去完成时表达了had taken发生在began以前："书在开始翻以前就被翻译好了"，很荒谬；and后面并没有采用与前面that平行的方式，而是重新起了一个分句，使得句式awkward
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