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Writting处作....望前辈批改....!

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发表于 2010-3-4 22:46:02 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
说实话,第一次完完整整写一篇....让我自己都觉得诧异的是,一点模板没用...不过用的时间到不少...  望前辈们指教啊!
顺便给些写作经验啊...  大恩不言谢...

Government should pay more money on pubilc transportation rather than access of internet.


Nowadays, with rapidly development of technology, more and more people are beginning to use internet which bring us numerous benefits. Undoubtedly, the number of people who use the internet will keep increaseing. Thus the government absolutely should spend more money on access of internet.


As people who live in this modern society, we always need the internet to assist us in our lives. Even we did not realize it sometimes. For instance, a vast majority of people have their own bank account. When we go to bank for deposit our money or draw them, to access our own bank account and verify our status, the bank staff will check our account numbers by the internet.


To some extent, the internet provides us myriad things, which we can not get from pubilc transportation such as information. Undeniably, we almost can obtain any information that we need from the internet. It can be our teacher, doctor, advicer, ect. Once, I had a problem that my bicycle was broken and I had no idea about how to repair it. But I got the solution by searching the information through the internet later. Also, we can eat exotic food at home by learning how to cook them on the internet without going to restauarant.


Furthermore, the internet offers us greater opportunities to make friends. Except meet our friends of real life, we can chat with our net-pals as well. Not only can we get to know some friends who have congenial tastes with us, but also even find our soul mate. I have a bunch of friends from the internet, they all from different contries. More importantly, some of these virtual friends have become my real life friends.


I can not imagine how my life would be without the internet. It broadens my horizon and enriches my life. Hence, I definitely think we need spend more money on access of internet in order to build our better life.
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