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刚写的。。看了几篇 改过的，学了写东西。。这个题目我没怎么弄明白。。还有我从来语法都是一团浆糊。。总的自我感觉文章结构不算明朗。。垃圾。。。各位牛人专家。。使劲拍。。过阵子就要考了，哪怕有个小问题，也希望大家给我指出来。。在这里，我谢谢大家了，非常感谢。。。
Topic: 是应该放更多的钱在access internet 上， 而不是public transportation 同意还是不要？
Every monday morning, drivers only can slowly ride their cars on highways, I shame on my government for why does not it spend our taxes on the poor transportation instead of the high-speed internet. Although the speed of our country to access Internet lay on a lower level around the world, however, proceeding to the life standard, I do address that much more money should be used to promote the public transportation lies in its poorness of status quo.
The threshold reason is that low-moving lifestyle caused by bad traffic system now leads people to suffer their lives. When highways are crowded by automobiles, for example, I deem that no one will be glade otherwise we will see upset on these drivers' faces, they are annoyed. I believe the primary work that government dose is to keep their people enjoying life, make them be happy; and it is the same thing that costing money to develop Internet world does. However, how could individuals become full-feeling in an abstract world given by being dissatisfied in real, after all, they have real lives to live.
Furthermore, time is another aspect to account for my point of view. Weekdays' traffic jams result in office staff cannot get to work in time and students are punished because of late. Then, the low effectiveness of work emerges due to not enough employees get to work in time and many students lose their classes. Even the society will be a mess at the end of the morning. Thereby, we can see that how important we have a better public transportation.
In summary, in my stance, Internet is just an abstract world and people do not gain much real stuff from it, on the contrary, the reality provide much more for whatever individuals or country. According to the context, a normal society needs a suitable traffic system to balance, therefore, I maintain that we have to pay much more money for developing the public transportation. |
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发表于 2009-12-18 13:44:04
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