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楼主
发表于 2003-11-3 10:30:00 | 只看该作者

885-B-7

7.Less detrimental than the effects of bacterial transformation is the effects of bacterial deterioration: spoilage of food, metals corroding, decay of wood, and other undesirable alterations of substances.
(A) is the effects of bacterial deterioration: spoilage of food, metals corroding
(B) are the effects of bacterial deterioration: spoilage of food, metals corroding
(C) is the effects of bacterial deterioration, which include spoilage of food, metals corroding
(D) are the effects of bacterial deterioration, which includes spoilage of food, corrosion of metals
(E) are the effects of bacterial deterioration: spoilage of food, corrosion of metals

what is wrong with (D)? thanks for help.
沙发
发表于 2003-11-3 10:41:00 | 只看该作者
D has 2 problems:

1. Instead of "which includes", should be "which include"
2. The sentence is wordy. Too unnecessarily long.

My 2 cents...
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2003-11-3 13:09:00 | 只看该作者
but i think "which" modifies "deterioration" that is single, so (D) may be grammatically correct. What do you think? anyway, thanks a lot, starwing.
地板
发表于 2003-11-3 14:24:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用billkuan在2003-11-3 13:09:00的发言:
but i think "which" modifies "deterioration" that is single, so (D) may be grammatically correct. What do you think? anyway, thanks a lot, starwing.


Here "spoilage of food, corrosion of metals... " are noun phrases which refer to the results of deterioration. Thus means, how ever, deterioration is a process. So the logic accordance breaks. How could one includes the result of itsself?
5#
发表于 2003-11-3 14:46:00 | 只看该作者
此题注意后面的spoilage of food, metals corroding, decay of wood, and other undesirable alterations of substances 实际上是effects of bacteria deterioration, 而不是deterioration本身。D在逻辑上不通
6#
 楼主| 发表于 2003-11-4 02:27:00 | 只看该作者
terrific! thank you very much, guys.
7#
发表于 2004-3-31 23:05:00 | 只看该作者
     句子的逻辑意思真是太重要了


     在D和E犹豫的时候,翻译一下句子意思,就能发现两个选项的异同,就能知道正确答案

8#
发表于 2005-7-31 15:12:00 | 只看该作者
oh
9#
发表于 2005-8-2 20:31:00 | 只看该作者
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10#
发表于 2006-3-8 13:43:00 | 只看该作者
spoilage of food为什么不能是deterioration,而是effects of bacteria deterioration,食物腐烂不就是deterioration吗,还是想不通
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