OG11-45

According
to some analysts, the gains in the stock market reflect growing
confidence that the economy will avoid the recession that many had
feared earlier in the year and instead come in for a "soft landing,"
followed by a gradual increase in business activity.
(A)    that the economy will avoid the recession that many had feared earlier in the year and instead come
(B)    in the economy to avoid the recession, what many feared earlier in the year, rather to come
(C)    in the economy's ability to avoid the recession, something earlier in the year many had feared, and instead to come
(D)    in the economy to avoid the recession many were fearing earlier in the year, and rather to come
(E)    that the economy will avoid the recession that was feared earlier this year by many, with it instead coming

Ans:A

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想請問
B the economy to avoid the recession is awkward and unclear;是因為子句比較好嗎？？
E with it instead coming is awkward, wordy, and ungrammatical 為何會有文法上的錯誤？？
D除了時態問題  , and rather to come 為何不可 和 to avoid 平行
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