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发表于 2010-3-17 00:32:52 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
2. (Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted )in the stride-pinao tradition of Willie( The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.
B. T M, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both
D. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted
B. The appositive introduces wordiness and unnecessary grammatical complexity…
我觉得这个同位语表达更清晰啊,
是为什么呢
对同位语这快清晰与否由什么讲究么?
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发表于 2010-3-17 16:36:38 | 只看该作者
我觉得B主要的错误是用了both,这里没有必要用both,而且容易与后面的and引起歧义。
简洁表达如何非常清楚,就没有必要再用同位语。D的表达非常清楚,相比之下,要比用同位语简洁。
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