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发表于 2009-2-28 00:09:00 | 只看该作者

求改作文

本人水平不好,还望各位耐心教导一下,改下作文……感激不尽啦

When faced with the decision of enjoying or saving earned money, some people enjoy money immediately, while others save his money for some time in the future. Depending on my own experience and life style, I prefer to save my money rather than spent it. Among numerous reasons why I choose to save, I would explore only a few of the most important ones here.

The main reason for my propensity for saving my money is thatno one can predict what will happen tomorrow, the only thing we can do now is to prepare money for unpredictable future. When disaster befalls, survive or die, mostly depends on the amount of money you have at hand. The good case in point is the sudden illness: Suppose somebody in your family catches a sudden deadly illness, such as a heavy car accident, and the surgery fee is too high for a common family to bear. Whether your relative can be salvaged depends on the money you have, and at this time, the money you save little by little will play a crucial role.

Another reason can be seen is that saving money helps us to sample the life in the upper classes. Most of us live on the wages paid every month, and few would like to buy luxury, which will cost, at least, half of their salary. Imagine a bit, however, you can save five thousand yuan a year, what are you able to do? You can go to an expensive restaurant with your family, especially the western restaurants which are most expensive in China, to enjoy the grace western environment and delicious dinner. What’s more, if you have persisted in saving money for some five years, you may go abroad travelling, which is the dream of the most Chinese youth.       

The last reason for my choice is that saving money in youth is a outstanding quality. As an old Chinese saying goes, thrift is one of the best virtues. I admit that sometime, spending money really feels fun, but it is not the only way for me to have fun. Expensive though fashion things are, the import cars, fashion clothes, luxury perfume, they will not make me truly happy. In my leisure time, I prefer swimming, hiking, playing tennis, which cost a little but bring me enormous happiness.

沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2009-2-28 00:12:00 | 只看该作者

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A BUSINESS
                                    RESEARCH
                                    CENTER OR AN AGRICULTURE
                                        RESEARCH
                                        CENTER
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BUSINESS
                                RESEARCH
                                CENTER OR AN AGRICULTURE
                                    RESEARCH
                                    CENTER
?

A BUSINESS
                        RESEARCH
                        CENTER OR AN AGRICULTURE
                            RESEARCH
                            CENTER
?

BUSINESS
                    RESEARCH
                    CENTER OR AN AGRICULTURE
                        RESEARCH
                        CENTER
?

A university plans to develop a new research center in my country. When faced with the decision of a business research or an agriculture research center, some people want a center for research in agriculture, while others, however, deem a center for business research as premier choice and that is also my point. Among the countless reasons which influence the choice, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.

The main reason why I support
                    
this point is that a business research center will stimulate the economic growth. The business research can  help companies to invest. Referring to the research made by center and getting more data, companies will make choices and decisions more easily. 
  The following statement is a typical exampleif a foreign company wants to invest in my country, he need the information about the average salary, the rent of the house, whether the local economy increasing and so on. At this time, the wisest choice for the company is to turn to the research made by the business research center. As a result, the business research center contributes a lot to our country economic growth, since it can assist our country in attracting more investment and building up a healthier economic environment.

Another reason why develop a business research center can be seen is that a business research center not only promote economic growth, but also alleviate the social pressure. The center is still in charge of establishing the standard of the relief fund and lowest salary, which affects the society stable deeply(换词). The more higher the relief fund is, the more stable our society will be. What is more, the business research center can help to offer more jobs, which, as important as relief fund, contributes to society stable. 
                    
Owning a permanent job and income, nobody has excuse to rob, steal or to do something else disrupting public order.

It would probably not be too kindly disposed to the idea that the agriculture research center is not important. Now, China is still a developing country, as well as an agriculture country, an agriculture research center would help further development in China’s sustainability and further the country on a global scale. Although the agriculture research center enjoys much enormous advantages, it cannot compete with the business research center in economy and social stability. For the reasons presented above, I strongly commit to the notion that building a business research center, but not an agriculture research center.   
板凳
发表于 2009-3-4 08:40:00 | 只看该作者
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