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发表于 2008-9-11 22:30:00 | 只看该作者

第一篇作文

知道有人帮改的可能性不大,但是还是发上来吧,图个安心,因为要考试了还没怎么连作文,呜呜

人们应不应该被允许在公共交通(巴士、火车、飞机)上使用移动电话

In recently year mobile phone have become more and more popular in our life, we can always notice that people use it to connect with their friends, family members or cooperators on the bus ,boat or plane and so on . It is definitely well known that mobile phone bring a verity of convenience in our daily life but using it in the public traffic also have some disadvantages. Therefore, I think we’d better forbid using mobile phone in some public transportation.

The prohibition of calling on the public traffic will create a slight quiet atmosphere.  We can image the scene when you are sleeping on the bus or just think about something, a man behind you speak aloud with phone. You may feel noisy and troublesome. Public traffic the place is full of crowed people, noisy atmosphere, and anxious emotion. In this situations, added mobile phone sound again would make people much angrier, especially more than one people use phone who in order to make themselves heard speak louder and louder at the same time. Believing no one can bear in that case, so we’d better not use mobile phone on the public traffic.

     Stopping using the cell phone on airplane can avoid of some dangerous even. As we know, the plane is controlled by computer currently while the route of data transmitted by computer covering the whole plane. If someone uses mobile phone on the airplane the electromagnetic emitted by the phone would interfere with the computer’s system and cause the signal disorder. What’s even worse it may make the airplane crash. Can you imagine just the little cell phone which can kill hundreds of people’s life? Accordingly, many countries have enacted the law to restrain this behavior.

The cell phone should not be permitted to use when you are driving the car. Every year there are innumerable traffic accidents caused by using the phone. Driving the car you need to have high attention to the conditions around you. Obviously, the cell phone could distract your attention and lead to the accident. Is it worth receiving phone which may be not important at all to lose your life even others?

We all acknowledge that the cell phone will help us deal with some big thing quickly and efficiently but when you drive car or on the airplane you’d better take your life or others’ into account. Being not permitted to use cell phone on the bus would create a civilization environment around us too.  


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