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People attend college or university for many different
reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased
knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific
reasons and examples to support your answer.

No matter how big
a college or a university can be, it’s still a place for education. The key
principle of education is to spread knowledge. So from my point of view,
neither colleges nor universities can escape the rules of education.

Before answering
the why question, let’s first check how can we step into a college or
university. SAT scores is the main criteria for most schools. What does SAT
stand for? It tests your knowledge learned in your past studying years. It’s
obvious that college or university chooses students by  knowledge. Knowledge is the connecting point
of college and high school, furthermore, it’s the soul of the education chain.

When we’re finally
enrolled in a university, we’ll have classes. Classes is where knowledge flows
from. All through our life, classes always have practical uses. They’re not
free. There must be a test or an exam to be his ultimate master. Education is
like a book, test result is its cover, while class is its context. We can then
come to a conclusion that SAT is the cover, equally, career preparation is its
cover. Knowledge, however, is the everlasting, permanent value inside.

College or
university is only responsible for carrying knowledge. How you develop with it
is up to yourself. So the reason why we go to college is to increase our
knowledge. As for your career development, is something beyond college’s duty,
but held in your own hands.

It’s definitely
sure that college or university provides some career preparation courses which
can not be obtained from its inferior schools. But all these affects cannot
outweigh its essential center. As the saying goes, theory applies to practice. Blind
practice finds himself no way. If we go to college only for practicing career
skill, we’ll achieve nothing. It’s only a waste of time.

When we’re in
education, learning knowledge is the king over everything!

第一次写Ibt作文，请大家多多提意见！！BOW～

我简单的扫一眼后，发现了如下问题：

你的段落太多，显得太零散，这样不利于说清楚事情

然后你的作文明显有高考的后遗症，之论证说理，殊不知例子最重要，每个事实都要有例子，每个例子都要有细节。

这样展开才能充分！

你的字数太少，明显不合要求，ets要求300字，可有几个人写300来字能得高分的，没有，往500+努力吧！

你的句子我没太看，不过注意逻辑吧，加油！