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independent Writing: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
                              eople who do not work because they have enough money are rarely happy.

 Many people think that the people who do not work because they have enough money

are rarely happy.It seemingly right to me at the very first glance,but after looking

into both sides of the matter, i think it's inaccurate.

 There are several reasons  to support my idea,I will explain some of the most

important ones as below:

 The very first one is that not working does not mean unhappiness if all the

man's/woman's basic needs for live are satisfied.Losing one's job may be a very

bothersome thing to those who have to rise his/her family.Because he will have no money

to pay his/her maintenance, what's more, the people may be very unhappy if he/she take

the job which he/she dislike just for that purpose.However, if we have encough money ,

We do not have to worry all the troublesome payment at all. We are free to  choose the

thing we love and buy all the thing we like without worrying about the money issue .So

not working does not mean we are not happy.

 
 Furthermore working is not the source of happness for most people.of course

there are some people enjoy a lot of fun from their job.but Many people work from day to

night just for getting a stable income to rise hiself/herself and his/her family.The

happness of life is not just working. some people think the happness of life is staying

with his family,other think they can get a lot of fun from traveling around the world

and making friends.Different people hold different opinions.So obviously working is not

the only source of pleasure .

 From what have been discussed above ,we are quite safe to come to the conclusion

that people who have encough money may be very happy even they do not work.

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