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拿3月15的几经作文写了一下~请帮我看看~谢谢~

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发表于 2008-3-18 21:58:00 | 只看该作者

拿3月15的几经作文写了一下~请帮我看看~谢谢~

边写边玩~没认真写~写了一个框架,因为实在想不出例子来~请大家帮帮忙~

我写作文老是想不出例子~不知道大家在这方面有么有什么办法?谢谢~!

土地主要应该用来给人类种田、盖房子、开工厂,而不是保护濒危动物。

Different people have different opinions on the question that whether land should be used to build houses or to protect extinct animals. For those who support the idea that land must be invested on farming and building house, they hold the reason that this would be benefit to the economy. While for those who like to put the land to protect the extinct animals, they think that this will save the precious life of the endangered living things. From my perspective, I strongly agree with the former.

 

To begin with, if land source is used to build large farms and towering buildings, the nearby area can benefit from it on its economy.
                
Statistics show that there are more buildings in ...(这句没写完) More
                
industrial architectures may enhance the economic development.

 

Further lending credence to my point, more economic buildings can bring about more job opportunities. As more companies and corporations are likely to establish in the newly built constructs, the problem of unemployment will be
                    released
.

 

Third, newly built farms, shopping malls, productive companies can make it more convenient for the local people to get commodities.

 

Indeed, extinct animals need our protection, and use the land to build wild parks to protect them can attract more tourists and meanwhile make the earth a better place. However, the benefits of making more farmland and building more architecture outweigh that of protecting animals. It will boost the economic development, solve the unemployment problems and provide convenience to the local citizens. In conclusion, we should make use of land by building more farms and architectures.

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 楼主| 发表于 2008-3-19 13:41:00 | 只看该作者
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