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备考作文第一篇,求拍,谢谢各位了哈!祝考试顺利

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发表于 2008-2-22 21:26:00 | 只看该作者

备考作文第一篇,求拍,谢谢各位了哈!祝考试顺利

我3月8号一站济南,今天才开始准备作文,用模板写了篇,不过时间可能拖的长了五到六分钟吧,主要是用在检查上了,希望各位兄弟姐妹拍拍,大家互相交流一下啊

Decisions can be made quickly, or they can be made after careful thought. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The decisions that people make quickly are always wrong. Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion. 

 

 

 

 

   It appears , in some aspects ,difficult to make a defination whether the quick decision is wrong.Depending on distinctive culture background and individual experience,different people will hold varied perspectives.As far as I am concerned,it's reasonable to disagree with the assertion that make immediate decision is wrong.

   The most persuasive point to be presented to develop my propensity is a quick decision maybe ,to some extent ,is the innovation which is benificial for the human beings.It’s the soul of anthropic wisdom and speculation.A good point in case is the structure of DNA double helix,which is put forward by the American biologist Watson and British biophysicist Crick by chance.They propose the coception when they have dinner accidently when they say the spiritial table in the restraunt,which light up the imagination blaze of the two scientists.Therefore ,in that circumstances,the decision is still a challenging overlap in the scientifical history.

  

   In addtion ,another crucial aspect can be obviously seen.In the social filled with the riavalship ,an equally important characteristic people should undertake is calm and consistent ,which in another word is to make the right decision at the crucial environment.For instance, when police confront with the terrorists,a qucik movement and speculation is so vital that can change the circumstances leading to eliminate the envy group.All the evidence above can demostrate the make quick decision is not always wrong.

  However ,I dom't want to overstate the vitues of quick choice,since it may suffer the defects of aggressive and irresponsible.For example ,when you are trapped in the delimma,the depression may trigger the confusion and upset ,which disturb your horizon and attribute to the detrimental decison and consequences.

   To sum up, the issue of the quick desicion is so complex that requires subjective judgment.Taking into account for all the reasom above ,make the immediate choice is not always wrong  on account that it is useful for the competition in the race ,such as making the choice whether to unleash your acceleration at the right position and prevail them in the 1000 meter running,though it may have several demerits.  


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沙发
发表于 2008-2-22 21:31:00 | 只看该作者
用太多模板了吧,当心!
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2008-2-22 21:32:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用sslazio在2008-2-22 21:31:00的发言:
用太多模板了吧,当心
多多指点一下啦呵呵,比如应该怎么改呢?
地板
发表于 2008-2-23 00:18:00 | 只看该作者

Decisions can be made quickly, or they can be made after careful thought. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The decisions that people make quickly are always wrong. Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion. 

红色 部分 可以省掉.简洁.

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 楼主| 发表于 2008-2-23 12:03:00 | 只看该作者

怎么没人理我呢呜呜呜

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