我的AA模板，希望牛人指点

开头段：In this argument,the author endorsed the recommendation/conclusion/sugesstion that….In support of the conclusion/… the author cites/offer the reason that…;Moreover,the author claims that …;Finally, the grouns provided for supporting/granting the conclusion/… is that… This argument is questionable and unconvincing with obscure,oversimplified and unwarranted claims for several reasons.

中间段（三段）

   To begin/start with,the author assumes that…While this is a tempting assumption,it seems to

be problemetic and doubtful because/for the reason that…

In the second place,the author presumes/supposes/provides the presumption that… However/ Neverthless,lacking/in short of  practical/concrete evidence stating clearly/ indicating/  illustrating that…the author’s standpoint/claim/generalization is unreliable/ unauthentic.

Finally,the author holds the viewpoint that ….One patent rejoinder /rebut to the line of reasoning is that…Obviously,it’s a failure for the author to establish a logic connection between…and …This in turn leaves open the possibility that…

结尾段

  As it stands,this is a problemetic argument because the author ignores the fact that… To substantiate the conclusion/… the author should provide/furnish adequate evidence to show that … and to illustrate/make sure that…

嗯，就这样，差不多，大同小异的。