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[求助]不知道怎么攻击Argument B1,请指教!

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楼主
发表于 2007-10-23 12:56:00 | 只看该作者

[求助]不知道怎么攻击Argument B1,请指教!

B1.The following appeared in a memorandum from the head of a human resources department at a major automobile manufacturing company to the company's managers:

Studies have found that employees of not-for-profit organizations and charities are often more highly motivated than employees of for-profit corporations to perform well at work when their performance is not being monitored or evaluated. Interviews with employees of not-for-profit organizations suggest that the reason for their greater motivation is the belief that their work helps to improve society. Because they believe in the importance of their work, they have personal reasons to perform well, even when no financial reward is present. Thus, if our corporation began donating a significant portion of its profits to humanitarian causes, our employees’ motivation and productivity would increase substantially and our overall profits would increase as well.”

想问问大家是怎么写的?

沙发
发表于 2007-10-23 14:15:00 | 只看该作者
Let me 抛砖引玉 ...

First, the HR head sucks becauses the head overlooks the possible structure difference between NPC and a normal company. In many of the NPCs, their staff force could be formed with people who may not the bread winners for the family. For those people, they work for the NPC with a passion to assist, to help. While in a normal company, people there could be very different. blah blah blah ... Fail to realize there could be a structure difference between a NPC and a normal organization cast doubts to the way susggested.

Second, the HR head sucks because the head assumes the employees of a normal company/organization will be motivated as long as the company make certain donation. A more detailed analysis shall be conducted to understand the possible outcomes. Some staff, can be a lot, may think that the company's profits would be lower if too much donation is given out, resulting in a lower year end bonus .... blah blah blah ...

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use the above 2 reason with care
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2007-10-24 01:55:00 | 只看该作者

谢谢

地板
发表于 2007-11-4 16:41:00 | 只看该作者
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