偶的第一篇作文求拍～不胜感激

D/C:The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.

In our modern society, people always confront the dilemma of whether being alone is a good way to have a rest. The statement is such a debated one that different people hold different opinions on it not only because of their respective personality but also because of their alien understandings. Personal, I totally can’t stay alone to have any relaxation.

The first reason that can be presented to develop my opinion is that loneliness makes people lack of strength. When some people feel lonely, they will become nervous and negative. A good example can be found in the case that my brother Tim, who can not concentrate on his homework well because he is afraid of staying alone in his bedroom and sitting at him table, study quite hard and get excellent jobs in his classroom or school’s library because there are many people as he says. In another word, he can behave well and relax to do anything bravely when being observed. Therefore, it is obvious to see that sometimes to spend time alone is not a good way for you to relax.

In addition, there is another reason for me to choose this statement and the reason is not far to seek: chatting with friends is much more helpful to reduce stress than spending time alone. To illustrate, let us consider that how terrible you will be if you suffer a serious disease, how stressful you will be if you need to complete a complicated project on time and how exhausted you will be if you go through a tough relationship. However, when your dear friends come to pat you and build up your confidence, all problems will die away. Hence, common sense and former experience inform us that the best way for us to forget all the trouble may be a heart-to-heart conversation with friends.

Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason that different people have different ways to release pain. In our daily life, some women prefer to go shopping and buy a great deal of clothes, cosmetics and foods which make them happy while some men would rather get together in a bar and have a drink of whiskey, vodka or beer which makes them exciting. So we can’t say that a party girl who likes rock and hip-pop should relax herself truly in a quite park.

To sum up all the reasons involved, my final point rests on a persuasive opinion towards an appropriate way (not just to stay alone) which is matched with your character to help you release and decompress. Then I believe we will be more relaxed and positive to face any trouble. (446words)

谢谢ｌｓ的

我也觉得很多地方论证的乱七八糟了，有点刻意的去替换题中的关键词，不过水平比较有限，可能替换的变意了

求大大们　这个同意替换怎么取舍呢？或者有什么更好的办法