狠狠的砸！7.28冲刺。。。

People attend college or university for many different reasons.Why do you think people attend college or university?

Career preparation is supposed to be the main purpose of attending colleges in my humble opinion. Some people might contend that it’s knowledge itself, not other things, that is the chief goal. Why not reflect on the question that without steady incomings to ensure your survive, how knowledge can be applied to the reality? That’s a mundane question to all the doctrinaires. So the first step to trek to everyone’s utopia is to get a well-paid and meaningful job.

Colleges offer the essential foundation for a qualified job-seeker. People may further their study in what they are interested in or what fully demonstrate their talents to confirm a radiant future. Adequate specialized knowledge can highly improved a person’s potential for a satisfying career. Confidence for a job also largely lies in it.

It’s not only the education provided but the people of the same goal met that make the college life a unique option for career preparation. For the association with people of same goal only, the experience in college can be still illustrated as the juncture in one’s life. My dad’s experience just exemplifies the point. Just as the saying goes: Man proposes, God disposes, failure invaded the young dreamer decades ago despite of his struggle. He lost all his fortune and confidence when he was deceived by a so-called investor. His inchoate career collapsed. He tried to get help from all his friends, but his hope vanished gradually with the refuse from those hypocritical friends. Then the dawn emerged. My dad’s best brother in the college turned to rescue him. That reversed the condition. Both material and spiritual help did my father gain from his friend. He not only encouraged my father by showing his respect for my dad’s aptitude, but lent a large amount of money to my dad to patronize his career. Furthermore, because of their same major, he also gave my father a lot of professional advice. According to my father’s words, if it hadn’t been for the altruistic help from his true friend, his life would have halted at that failure. It’s quite lucky that my dad has undergone such a meaningful college life. At least as to my view, the people you encounter in school are quite different from those you meet after graduation.

College life benefits you for your further career not only in specialized knowledge, but in the true friends you may get.

我不管什么考试都会懒得练writing...直到最后一刻才发觉完蛋了...写这篇破文章花了我远远不止半个小时了...很多词卡在脑子里拼不出来。郁闷！！！要疯写了...不然真的完蛋....请狠狠的砸，让我知道要往哪里继续疯...

humble这个词用得尤其的烂

写作要自信,要forceful

humble opinion这样的词汇,不要用