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急问:大作文中有必要存在“让步段"么

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楼主
发表于 2007-7-3 12:05:00 | 只看该作者

急问:大作文中有必要存在“让步段"么

传统的5段论,其中倒数第二段都涉及一下让步,比如,一直支持的也有它的缺陷或者一直反对的也有一点优点,但还是自己选的那个最站的住脚。

请问,在2选1话题中,这段的存在是否有必要?是不是完全一边倒好些?

本人让老美改了次作文,她完全不能理解这段存在的意义。


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沙发
发表于 2007-7-3 12:35:00 | 只看该作者
我觉得可以存在,但必须有结尾段!
板凳
发表于 2007-7-3 18:31:00 | 只看该作者
well... um... that depends.

If you are skillful enough to clarify what are you going to say, that's fine.

If you have enough time to write whole bunch of words, which would probably confuse the raters, then you shouldn't! You'd better go back to check your spelling, as well as grammar, mistakes.

If you want to get a score on the test, you need to keep you essay as simple as it can ever be. Always remember, simple is the best!

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地板
 楼主| 发表于 2007-7-4 06:25:00 | 只看该作者

感谢楼上2位

我通常习惯此段说, 一直支持的也有瑕疵 但总体还是功大于过

这是不是画蛇添足阿

5#
发表于 2007-7-4 07:09:00 | 只看该作者
你事怎样理解让步段的呢,能不能发来文章看看。
6#
发表于 2007-7-4 17:24:00 | 只看该作者
You can just say one sentence to mention that there are some advantages of doing sth., but the flaws greatly outweigh the merits.

One sentence is enough.

And you don't need to focus on it too much, or you'd confuse the rater, which is likely for you to get a lower score.
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