GWD1-Q2:找到了出处但仍然不知道该选哪个~

Mideast immigrants' rates of entrepreneurship exceed virtually every other immigrant group in the increasingly diverse United States economy.

(A) Mideast immigrants' rates of entrepreneurship exceed

(B) Mideast immigrants are exhibiting rates of entrepreneurship exceeding

(C) Immigrants from the Mideast exhibit rates of entrepreneurship exceeding those of

(D) The rates of entrepreneurship in immigrants from the Mideast exceed

(E) The rates of Mideast immigrants' entrepreneurship exceeds those of

考点: 比较（Comparison）
                        主谓一致（Agreement）
                        有效用词（Diction）

1) 比较双方要对等

2) 在GMAT中,双重所有格,即 the rates of immigrants’ 表达错误, 应该改为the rates of immigrant或者 immigrants’ rates

3) 对比对象中出现的重复名词用that或those代替,that代替前面出现的单数名词,those代替前面出现的复数名词

(A) immigrants’ rates不能同other immigrant group相比.

(B) rates of entrepreneurship不能同other immigrant group相比

(C) 正确, 用those代替前面出现过的rates,比较双方对应

(D) the rates of entrepreneurship不能同other immigrant group相比

(E) 使用双重所有格,错误;
                        主谓不一致:主语是rates,谓语应该用exceed.

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A survey of 765 working women over eighteen years of age found that 60 percent of them worked 40 or more hours a week and for married women with children under eighteen it was more likely that they would work different shifts from their husbands.

(A) for married women with children under eighteen it was more likely that they would work different shifts from their husbands

(B) for married women whose children were under eighteen, they were more likely than other married women to work shifts different from their husbands'

(C) when married women had children under eighteen it was more likely for them to be working different shifts from those of their husbands'

(D) that married women with children under eighteen were more likely than other married women to work shifts different from their husbands'

(E) that when married women had children under eighteen they were more likely to be working shifts that differed from their husbands

A. 第二个发现的内容作为谓语found的宾语，为宾语从句，that不能省略；different shifts from their husbands 将 shifts 与 husbands 相比，比较对象不对等，此处应该使用所有格husbands’

B. 第二个发现的内容作为谓语found的宾语，为宾语从句，that不能省略

C. 第二个发现的内容作为谓语found的宾语，为宾语从句，that不能省略；when引导时间状语从句，表达的意思与原句不同；be working时态错误；those of their husbands’为双重所有格，错误，正确的表达方式应该为those of their husbands，或者their husbands’。

D. 正确。

E. That differed from their husbands修饰对象为shifts，即，将husband与shifts相比较，比较对象不对等；when引导时间状语从句，表达的意思与原句不同；be working时态错误。

句子结构：A survey found that… and that….

句子描述一个调查的两个发现，两个发现分别由that引起的宾语从句表示，两者平行。

句子结构（Grammatical Construction）, 简洁有效（Rhetorical Construction）

1) 宾语从句中的that不能省略。

2) GAMT中，不允许出现双重所有格。