GWD1-Q2:找到了出处但仍然不知道该选哪个~

buda

那这道题到底选什么呢？B中的which可以修饰country，可以修饰market还可以修饰share呢，

buda

是不是相比之下，B是最好的，其他都有明显的语法错误及重大逻辑缺陷。

laipiyu

这题很简单，代词指代，which修饰。

毋庸置疑选E。 B的which修饰问题很严重。from...to...根据实际情况可以颠倒，不能作为排除依据。

黄公子

这题考到的话，那到底选什么啊

hardcandy

选E

aidi_more

答案应该是E ，

语法上讲B和E都是完全正确的，只不过从ETS习惯上讲应该是E的which更好一些，避免修饰歧义。

虽然B中的which可跳跃修饰market，在OG题中，有很多情况，which是可以跳跃修饰的，特别是前面是个介词短语in the country。

popo2

没看出e是双重所有格阿

its share of the country's $21 billion book market

简化一下就是：

its share of the market

clarke1127

E不对是因为无生命物体不能用所有格's

请问 D为何不对。

connie4895

以下是引用兔斯基在2008-4-22 11:31:00的发言：

GWD1-Q2:找到了出处但仍然不知道该选哪个~

By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase their share of the country’s $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks.

A.      their share of the country’s $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging

B.       from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges

C.      to 10 percent from 6 percent in their share of the $21 billion book market in the country, a market ranging

D.      in its share, from 6 percent to 10 percent, of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges

E.       to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country’s $21 billion book market, which ranges

 

 

New York Times:

By merging its Bantam Doubleday Dell division with Advance Publications' Random House, Bertelsmann will increase to 10 percent from nearly 6 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the United States, which ranges from Bibles to mass-market paperbacks.

看来increase to--- from---是可以接受的

但原文竟然是B和E的结合！！到底选那个呢？？

请NN帮忙看看吧。

 看了很久，发现B选项是有岐义的，in the country可以后置修饰market, 但也可以理解成这间公司increase its share这件事是发生在这个国家的，之前看到前人的帖子好像有论到类似的错误点。自己觉得E比较清楚

littlesharon

我觉得是E

       from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges

B中which修饰有歧义。而且原句中 the country’s $21 billion book market 这样表达比the $21 billion book market in the country还是its share of the $21 billion book market in the country清楚！