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第一篇有点象样的作文,大家看看如何

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发表于 2007-5-23 16:55:00 | 只看该作者

第一篇有点象样的作文,大家看看如何

Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.

Upon to the question that which is better, university students should be required to attend classes or going to classes should be optional for students, different people have different opinions. Attending class has its advantages, but at the mean time, it has many disadvantages, too. In my point of view, I would prefer optional attending school. There are many reasons supporting my view.

 

The main reason why I prefer optional attending school is that not all classes are suitable for every student. For example, the class is about comparison of American and English literature. Someone is a national student who just arrived to America from China and his listening is not adequate for this class. What do you think he should do? Attending this class with nothing understood or attending some language course at first? Obviously, he or she should solve his or her language problem as soon as possible. Under the circumstances, it is not proper to compel every body to attend this class.

 

Another important reason why I like optional is that by this way students can study more efficiently. As much as I know, not all curriculum schedule accords with everybody’s habit. For example, physics class is arranged at two o’clock in afternoon and it is the hardest curriculum for me, meantime, what makes it worse is that I am easy to get drowsy at this time. So should I go to physics class at 2:00pm or should I choose another time such as 8:00am to attend this class? Of course I will choose latter. Everybody knows that you will do you best at the right time.

 

Optional is superior in another way, that is developing your self-study ability. The most important thing we should gain in university is not knowledge but how to gain knowledge. So the self-study capacity is very important. Optional can help you obtain this capability.

 

As the proverb says “everything has two sides”, there are also some advantages in being required to attend class, such as preventing students’ laziness, systematical study and so on. But if all the factors are contemplated, going to school optionally carries more weight than the other. So I agree with the view of going to school optionally for students.

沙发
发表于 2007-5-23 18:20:00 | 只看该作者

第一段全是废话呀`````````````````````

模版掌握得不错`

板凳
发表于 2007-5-23 18:57:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用zdlukeluck在2007-5-23 18:20:00的发言:

第一段全是废话呀`````````````````````

模版掌握得不错`

第二句话算褒还是贬。。。

地板
发表于 2007-5-23 19:04:00 | 只看该作者

````````不错不错

体会出来了

肯定是表意撒````

5#
发表于 2007-5-23 19:40:00 | 只看该作者
建议把 people's opinion 说得详细些应该就不算模板了
6#
发表于 2007-5-23 21:28:00 | 只看该作者

Attending class has its advantages, but at the mean time, it has many disadvantages, too.
        

你这句太逗了 哈哈

7#
发表于 2007-5-23 21:35:00 | 只看该作者

paragraph1: tedious and boring.

paragraph2:

the third line:  "arrived to"----"have just arrived in "   or    " have just arrived at."

the fourth line:Attend the class without any concept of western culture and even mastering everyday English well?

the seventh line: "every body"---"everybody"

And I want to have a try.

8#
发表于 2007-5-23 21:36:00 | 只看该作者

As more and more people have the chance to attend university, and everyone has their own appetite and taste. The original principle of teaching setting that requires the students to attend certain course is doubted; therefore a dramatic comes along the query debate weather classes should be optional for students.

 

Some people hold the opinion that university should require the students to attend classes because they take for granted that everyone is same without distinguished characteristics, and the accordant classes standards is helpful to foster people that are accustomed to obey. It’s true that some people who have a strong sense of discipline and tent to follow rules docilely will come into being, but considering the inevitable fashion of globalization and the diversity of the world, I must say this attitude is outdated. On the contrary, the new idea that students should have the freedom to determine the classes they’d like to attend keeps pace with time, there are a lot of advantages if the classes are optional for students.

 

First, students who have right to choose class to attend can pursue what they are interested in and good at, and then it will fulfill their talent or potential in certain fields. Let me set Steve Jobs, CEO of the Apple Computer Inc., as an example. When he was in Reed College, he couldn’t find any value in the courses that the college set as requirement so he dropped out after the first six months. Then he stayed around the campus and were deeply touched by the hand calligraphy in Reed College’s beautiful posters, so he dropped in the calligraphy class, and in which, he learned how to distinguish the space between different letters’ combinations, how to make the typography. Maybe, at that time, he just followed his heart and intuition and didn’t expect any benefit from the course. But ten years later, not until he created the unique typography of word in the Macintosh, did he realize it was the best decisions he have ever made to attend the calligraphy class. What I want to tell is not encouraging us to drop out of school; instead, it could be much reasonable and better if the school would set some optional classes to let us to pursue what interests us.

 

Additional, the optional classes will develop your ability to study without teacher’s guidance. It is known to all, if the university doesn’t set the superior standard of curriculum, there will be more courses because everybody’s taste is different. Let put it this way, if the class of English Literature, luckily enough, is used to be experimented as an optional classes, I mean, it is divided into several parts into different genres such as narratives, fictions, novels in order to give the students a plenty of choices, then, the teachers will be in lack, so it’s essential and necessary for students to have a high level of disciplines to study for themselves if they really want get something useful from these optional classes.

 

Let me draw a conclusion, indeed, there are some minor advantages if we continue the formal way of requiring students to attend classes, but compared with the benefits we get if we alter the new trend of giving the students freedom, they are almost can be ignored. So, I believe, optional classes are the best solution, if we really see it from students’ perspective.

 

9#
发表于 2007-5-23 21:38:00 | 只看该作者
字太小了,再来一次。
10#
发表于 2007-5-23 21:38:00 | 只看该作者

As more and more people have the chance to attend university, and everyone has their own appetite and taste. The original principle of teaching setting that requires the students to attend certain course is doubted; therefore a dramatic comes along the query debate weather classes should be optional for students.

 

Some people hold the opinion that university should require the students to attend classes because they take for granted that everyone is same without distinguished characteristics, and the accordant classes standards is helpful to foster people that are accustomed to obey. It’s true that some people who have a strong sense of discipline and tent to follow rules docilely will come into being, but considering the inevitable fashion of globalization and the diversity of the world, I must say this attitude is outdated. On the contrary, the new idea that students should have the freedom to determine the classes they’d like to attend keeps pace with time, there are a lot of advantages if the classes are optional for students.

 

First, students who have right to choose class to attend can pursue what they are interested in and good at, and then it will fulfill their talent or potential in certain fields. Let me set Steve Jobs, CEO of the Apple Computer Inc., as an example. When he was in Reed College, he couldn’t find any value in the courses that the college set as requirement so he dropped out after the first six months. Then he stayed around the campus and were deeply touched by the hand calligraphy in Reed College’s beautiful posters, so he dropped in the calligraphy class, and in which, he learned how to distinguish the space between different letters’ combinations, how to make the typography. Maybe, at that time, he just followed his heart and intuition and didn’t expect any benefit from the course. But ten years later, not until he created the unique typography of word in the Macintosh, did he realize it was the best decisions he have ever made to attend the calligraphy class. What I want to tell is not encouraging us to drop out of school; instead, it could be much reasonable and better if the school would set some optional classes to let us to pursue what interests us.

 

Additional, the optional classes will develop your ability to study without teacher’s guidance. It is known to all, if the university doesn’t set the superior standard of curriculum, there will be more courses because everybody’s taste is different. Let put it this way, if the class of English Literature, luckily enough, is used to be experimented as an optional classes, I mean, it is divided into several parts into different genres such as narratives, fictions, novels in order to give the students a plenty of choices, then, the teachers will be in lack, so it’s essential and necessary for students to have a high level of disciplines to study for themselves if they really want get something useful from these optional classes.

 

Let me draw a conclusion, indeed, there are some minor advantages if we continue the formal way of requiring students to attend classes, but compared with the benefits we get if we alter the new trend of giving the students freedom, they are almost can be ignored. So, I believe, optional classes are the best solution, if we really see it from students’ perspective.

 

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