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Your school has enough money to purchase either computers for students or books for the library. Which should your school choose to buy - computers or books? Use specific reasons and examples to support your recommendation.

If I were asked to choose whether to buy [either] computers or books, I would not hesitate to choose the computer. The [on] computer can take a great deal of wonderful things to students[you]. In the following contents, I will describe some of the striking contrasts between computers and books that I have found.

First of all, [I put a premium on the convenience.-please modify this sentence] There is much more available to buy computers than to buy books.[I don’t think so. In my nation, it is more easy to buy books than buy computers.] I[, for one,-uncessary] want gain more information in a short time.[cohesion break] A person who spend most of vigor in the school – where all of the works are the most concentrated – will simply not be as full as he would have been in his leisure time, with the same habits. Like most people, I hope to work in the environment of what the information can be gain expediently.

[bad format and have a lot of awkward sentences so as to bring about confusion.]

The books also do not seem to be suitable for your requirement. With the process of the time, the context of the books will never catch the changing of the world. Under no circumstances, such as the knowledge and information, is the book useful for you.[That book is useless is just your prejudice] In some cases, I went to the library [that I] in order to [want to] research some relative information to my work. Unfortunately, the context of the books has been already helpless for me. As a result, I had to go to another library to gain the information.

[unpersuasive point. As far as I know, many libraries have interlibrary loan, therefore, you can get your information by receiving fax because of interlibrary loan.]

There is also the practical matter of expenses. Tosimply put it, I want to save money. With the lapse of the time, my school must buy the latest books every month. The price of the information is more expensive than that on the internet.[, however,] In addition, we can search these information[will be researched] through the Internet[, is inexpensive.] [In a sense, the computer’s price is amazingly cheaper than the books.] According to the above descriptions, we can know that the information price of computers is amazingly cheaper than that of books.

[sentence format is very disappointing]

In conclusion, for the reason that I have presented above, [he] I can not buy books [ that] because I want to save money.[, and that] Besides, the computer’s
                        functions are [is] more useful than the books[,] so that purchasing computers for my school is the essential trend.