[分享]已修改过的作文链接

以下为修改过的作文的链接。

入版的CDer可以先看看这些修改，注意一些问题，然后再发文章。

这样会节省很多的时间。

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=68&ID=263402&page=1

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=68&ID=263158&page=1

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=68&ID=253607&page=3

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=68&ID=253272&page=3

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=68&ID=255670&page=3

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=68&ID=252589&page=4

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=68&ID=252523&page=4

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=68&ID=252207&page=4

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?BoardID=68&ID=252103&replyID=2358106&skin=1

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?BoardID=68&ID=253272&replyID=&skin=1

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?BoardID=68&ID=253607&replyID=2368606&skin=1

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?BoardID=68&ID=254992&replyID=2380608&skin=1

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=68&ID=269116&page=1

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=68&ID=269506&page=1

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=68&ID=270111&page=1

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=68&ID=270583&page=1

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=68&ID=270847&page=1

up~

Thx~

依然谢谢～～～

弱弱的建议~~不如德克版主直接把修改好的文章贴在这里~~这样不用打开连接啦~~哈哈哈

顶!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LZ说在iBT区上有写作的帖子,说过开头应该如何开,最好是提供background information式的开头,这个开头是万能的经典开头

可是为什么我找不到呢