Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also caused erosion and very quickly deforested whole regions. A.Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also 用了点倒装,外加not noly 。。。。but also 解释:既。。。又 did前置倒装,由于之前的not only中带入了主语【the systematic clearing of forests】,而后面是逗号,我觉的it加入还是可以接受的。但是我倾向于没有逗号,去掉it B.Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast), which gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but also 这里的which修饰farmland,意思不对,农场给么消费者相对不贵的房子和家具。 C.The systematic clearing of forests in the United States, creating farmland (especially in the Northeast) and giving consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but also 前面没有not only。not only。。。。but also一定是成双出现的 D.The systematic clearing of forests in the United States created farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also 前面没有not only。not only。。。。but also一定是成双出现的 E.The systematic clearing of forests in the United States not only created farmland (especially in the Northeast), giving consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it but it不对,必须是but also。另外,分词在当中修饰,不好
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