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      The best both world

  With the development of society, people started pay more attention to travel, the city which has the artificial view, natural scenery, and convenient transportations systems were stander in middle of china.

  In the east of this city has very famous artificial view which is called the Shaolin temper in the world. The shaolin temper was built in 495 AD that has very long history. Especially, the real, original Chinese kongfu in here was developed very well, and also well-known in the world. For example, the Chinese kongfu in the Hollywood become more and more important, popular, and lots of people went to china to learn it. Last year the Russia’s president went to china, and went to the shaolin temper. The one of the most important place in here is the very huge, and great tower lin. The tower lin also was protect very well. The shaolin temper is the one very famous artificial view in this city.

   In the west of this city also has very natural scenery which is very nice spot for travelers to visit. It is very normal that north china is lack of water, but here different. There are hundred of springs and the spouted water flow continuously streams and waterfalls. Unrestraint water, brisk water, exaggerative water and gentle water are here and there. It is a real water world. The grove of bamboo stretches endlessly and consists of a beautiful natural gallery. The traveler not only can come here for visit and leisure, and also can see lots of beautiful view about the bamboo, live in the hotel which made by the bamboo, eat some food was also made by the bamboo. This is one of the most important natural spot for the travelers to visit.

   Even though, the views are far away from one to another one, the transportation systems were developed very well in this city. For through the two different spot of view only spent the travelers one hour, it is very fast and convenient. The travelers also do not fell very boring to through on the road, because there are also have some beautiful view and some restaurants and shop stores to help the travelers who are hungry or need some staffs. For people who want to driver the car by themselves, there is also having some systems to help them if they have some problems. The transportation systems are very important for the travelers to traveling.

   The city, zhengzhou, was stander in the middle of china has a lot of beautiful views and also have convenient transportation systems to help the travelers have very nice mood to visit in.  

      The best both world

  With the development of transportation and media communication of modern society, people start tp pay more attention on travel. Zhengzhou, the city has shining history,  natural scenery, and convenient transportation system becomes a rising star in middle China.

  In the east of this city, the very famous artificial view  is the Shaolin Temple. Shaolin Temple was built in A.D 495  and survived through long history.  It is regarded as  the origin of  real Chinese kongfu and has been admired by the Kongfu fans from the whole world.  For example, as the Chinese kongfu become more and more popular and recognized in Hollywood, lots of people go to china to learn it. Last year ,druing his visit to China, the Russia’s president went to the Shaolin Temple himself. One of the most important places in Shaolin Temple is the enormous tower forest that has been well protected.

   Even though, the views are far away from one to another one, the transportation systems were developed very well in this city. For through the two different spot of view only spent the travelers one hour, it is very fast and convenient. The travelers also do not fell very boring to through on the road, because there are also have some beautiful view and some restaurants and shop stores to help the travelers who are hungry or need some staffs. For people who want to driver the car by themselves, there is also having some systems to help them if they have some problems. The transportation systems are very important for the travelers to traveling.

   The city, zhengzhou, was stander in the middle of china has a lot of beautiful views and also have convenient transportation systems to help the travelers have very nice mood to visit in.  
                

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