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请问几道gwd语法,谢谢~

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楼主
发表于 2005-9-26 10:45:00 | 只看该作者

请问几道gwd语法,谢谢~

1. Minivans carry as many as 7 passengers and,compared with most  sport utility vehicles,cost less,get better gas mileage,allow passengers to get in and out more easily ,and have a smoother ride.


Minivans,carrying as many as 7 passengers ,compared with most  sport utility vehicles,cost less,get better gas mileage,allow passengers to get in and out more easily ,and have a smoother ride.


GWD正确答案是第一个,但是第一个7passengers and中的AND感觉是不是重复,因为本来似乎应该是A,插入语,B,C,and D的结构,现在是A and,插入语,B,C,and D.而且第一个并列成分中是AS....AS...,后面是比较级的并列,这样的并列是不是不工整???另外,第二个哪里错了?? 


2.The supreme being was Esaugete Emissee,who dwelt in an upper realm in which the sky was the floor,and who had the power to give and to take away the breath of life. 


The supreme being was Esaugete Emissee,who dwelt in an upper realm where the sky was the floor,having the power to give and to take away the breath of life. 


感觉第二句中的where 比 in which 要好,第一句似乎更顺,但是不知道第二句哪里错了?


3.A leading figure in the Scottish enlightenment,Adam Smith wrote 2 major books that are to democratic captalism what MAX's Das capital is to socialism.


A leading figure in the Scottish enlightenment,Adam Smith wrote 2 major books that are to democratic captalism similiar to MAX's Das capital is to socialism.


感觉后一句似乎表达更清楚,而前一句中的WHAT用法不太清楚,指代的什么??GWD正确大案是前一个.


谢谢~~



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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2005-9-26 16:08:00 | 只看该作者
re~~
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2005-9-27 20:39:00 | 只看该作者

自己顶,再问,谢谢~~

地板
发表于 2005-9-28 00:30:00 | 只看该作者

第二题having有修饰floor的岐义。另外两题还待考虑。


楼主看一下发帖规则,修改一下标题,并把题目贴全好吗


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发表于 2005-9-28 11:47:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用sunnybay在2005-9-26 10:45:00的发言:

1. Minivans carry as many as 7 passengers and,compared with most  sport utility vehicles,cost less,get better gas mileage,allow passengers to get in and out more easily ,and have a smoother ride.


Minivans,carrying as many as 7 passengers ,compared with most  sport utility vehicles,cost less,get better gas mileage,allow passengers to get in and out more easily ,and have a smoother ride.


GWD正确答案是第一个,但是第一个7passengers and中的AND感觉是不是重复,因为本来似乎应该是A,插入语,B,C,and D的结构,现在是A and,插入语,B,C,and D.而且第一个并列成分中是AS....AS...,后面是比较级的并列,这样的并列是不是不工整???另外,第二个哪里错了??


应该尽量避免连个分词短语象本题这样的连用方式。因为,很容易歧义,比如本题,compared with most  sport utility vehicles 是什么成份?肯定有歧义,因为,其可以做状语,也可以是定语修饰passengers, 如果将compared with most  sport utility vehicles  移到句首,则第二个答案还是可能对的。 


2.The supreme being was Esaugete Emissee,who dwelt in an upper realm in which the sky was the floor,and who had the power to give and to take away the breath of life. 


The supreme being was Esaugete Emissee,who dwelt in an upper realm where the sky was the floor,having the power to give and to take away the breath of life. 


感觉第二句中的where 比 in which 要好,第一句似乎更顺,但是不知道第二句哪里错了?


in which没有问题。第二个having有问题。


3.A leading figure in the Scottish enlightenment,Adam Smith wrote 2 major books that are to democratic captalism what MAX's Das capital is to socialism.


A leading figure in the Scottish enlightenment,Adam Smith wrote 2 major books that are to democratic captalism similiar to MAX's Das capital is to socialism.


感觉后一句似乎表达更清楚,而前一句中的WHAT用法不太清楚,指代的什么??GWD正确大案是前一个.


what 地用法与大全的此题类似。


578.        ersonal trainers and fitness coaches are to the narcissistic 1980’s just like a private fencing master and dancing teacher was to an earlier time.


(A) just like a private fencing master and dancing teacher was


(B) as have been a private fencing master and dancing teacher


(C) what private fencing masters and dancing teachers were


(D) what private fencing masters and dancing teachers are(C)


(E) just the same as private fencing masters and dancing teachers had been


谢谢~~





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 楼主| 发表于 2005-9-29 12:10:00 | 只看该作者

many thanks to you guys~

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