Hello there,
I'd love to help you out dude, but I need more detail!
1. What is your GMAT
2. What is your TOELF?
3. Which uni did you graduate from?
4. How many promotions did you have?
5. Who is your employer?
6. Do you have any leadership at work?
7. Any interesting community service?
8. Any interesting extra curriculars?
If you can get back to me with more info, I can help you out,
Best,
Jon