急啊.大家都在吗?怎么没人理啊?

大家考T时都用模板吗?我这次用模板写的,理由也严格遵守新东方教的万能理由.由于压对了题我还用上了几个新东方的句子模式,本以为这次作文能得5分以上,可最后只有3.5还不如我上次考T,当时刚刚高中毕业用自己少得还不到2200的词汇写了篇很幼稚的作文都得了4分,可这次的分数这么恶心,怎么回事呢?

硬套模板不是好办法的。 要写活自己的模板。

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=68&ID=65453&page=1

参考一下

估计跑题了

那14个理由姐姐用了没?

When it comes to the issue as to weather.......people are likely to provide varying response. As far as l am concernd, l firmly like(believe)......In this essay, l will justify my reasons through details.

The most important reason for my view is that......therefore.....

The second reason for my view is that.......thus......

The third reason for my view is that.......

In the summary, as suggested by the previous reasons.........therefore, l strongly suggested that we should.....

这就是我平时用的模板,我考试时也是用它,当时我是打字的,大家帮我分析分析啊,看看是这个模板的问题还是我个人的问题.谢谢大家了.

我不知道14个理由指什么,我用了新东方教的那些,估计就是你所说的14个理由了.我当时还用里好多新东方老师上课将作文时的原句子,只是把里面的名词地点换了换有的动词该了一下.是不是因为这个反而弄巧成拙了?

MM还能回忆出当时写的具体细节吗？光从你的模板看，很难说就是模板的原因。

         the most important reason for my view is that in the modern time,####and ****      enable people to better enjoy their lives.It is a common truth that most###and**have devote themselves to the entertainment.For instance, the United States has the largest number of comedy and millions of movies broadcast daily in various US TV stations.Therefore the families enable to watch TV and discuss together. Because them our daily life was obviously enhanced.        

        In the second place,people are able to identify the popular tend through the overwhelming popularity of the stars ,on the other hand ,they made a lot of advertisements,which take a lot of convenience to the society .

        In the third place, most stars have a very short career,  they  have not received systematic education and thus are unable to live with other jobs.
While l was studying at the ESL program in simon fraser university ,l happened to carry out a relevant research and found out that, ninety percent of the stars just have  three or four years  in their whole career with one year peak time.Though it may not be strictly accurate,it mainly conforms to the reality.

这是我考试时写的DETAIL.再加上我原来的模板就是我的整篇考试ESSAY了.这篇文章我在考试前写过并背了下来所以考试时写的我现在还能很清楚的默写下来.大家看看这篇文章是不是有问题啊?   
      

楼主这篇文章的主要问题可能还是出在语言细节上和论述上。在俺看来，第二个理由和第三个理由写得不好。第二段基本只有一个观点句；第三段让人无法在第一时间读出你的观点和逻辑。此外，有不少语法错误。另外，俺猜想，你的运气可能也的确不好，碰上这样一道比较抽象的题，而且判卷人可能当时也正好不爽，于是。。。

Anyway, cheer up! 下次考前多写几篇。从你的基础来看，上５分希望很大。