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It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.

Although a lot of people think that children grow up in the countryside better than in a big city, different people would have different opinions because of their different backgrounds. As far as I am concerned, I strongly believe that children grow up in the city better than in the countryside. I will illustrate my views by following discussion.

First of all, the children who live in city can get good education. The 21^st century is the intellectual competition. The school systems are very good organized in big city, and so the children who live in city would get a lot of advanced knowledge, and they take a lot of advantages.

Secondly, the children who live in a big city would be more open-mind. They can touch a lot of new technology, modern art, fashion, and so on. Their knowledge would be very widely because the knowledge is not only from the book, but also from the society.

Last but not least, a child growing up in the city has the advantages of a lot of interesting and exciting place to visit. He or she can go to the zoo, museum, art galleries and concerts. There are a lot of restaurants with different kinds of food. It is easy to see every new movie that comes out. Child in the countryside does not have a lot of these activities nearby.

In conclusion, based on the reasons that I presented, I strongly believe that living in a big city is better than living in the countryside.

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