求大神评一下我的独立写作

tonychen123 · 发表于 2014-8-22 15:24:02

题目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

When teachers assign projects on which students must work together, the students learn much more effectively than when they are asked to work alone on projects.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
作文：When we are discussing the issue that whether the students work together much more effectively or when they are asked to work alone on projects more effectively,far more than half I guess,hold the viewpoint that work alone on projects more effectively.I am always amazed when hear them say so,since I have an opposite point of view that students learn much more effectively when they work together.
            The reason why I think so is that we can listen to different mind from different people when we work together.As a result,we can easier to finish it .Take me for example.I had done a project by myself so that I did not know how to finish it and paid so much time to find the method to finish it.From then on,I never work alone.
            In addition,we can divide the project into several parts and everyone do their own part.In this way,the project can be finished for less time.Furthermore,we can discuss the problem and deal it if someone in the team meet a problem.
            What's more?Different people have different special skills and we can exert them to make the project faster to finish.Neverthless,people always work together is easier to build a friendship.When they do the project together,they must need to commuicate with each other.
            To sum up ,due to the above reasons,I agree that students work together much more effectively。

求大神评一下我的独立写作

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