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发表于 2012-5-10 00:50:19 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
A recent review of pay scales indicates that CEO’s now earn an average of 419 times more pay than blue-collar workers, compared to a ratio of 42 times in 1980.

A. that CEO’s now earn an average of 419 times more pay than blue-collar workers, compared to a ratio of 42 times

B.
that, on average, CEO’s now earn 419 times the pay of blue-collar workers, a ratio that compares to 42 times
C.
that, on average, CEO’s now earn 419 times the pay of blue-collar workers, as compared to 42 times their pay, the ratio
D.
CEO’s who now earn on average 419 times more pay than blue-collar workers, as compared to 42 times their pay, the ratio
E.CEO’s now earning an average of 419 times the pay of blue-collar workers, compared to the ratio of 42 times

答案:C
看了之前NN们的讨论帖,得出结论这里B选项 a ratio that compares to 42 times 不对的原因是,这个42times没有表明是什么times(A 也是),而C表达就很清楚。

那么我想问 ,下面这一题的C选项,
compared with about 35% decade ago.就很明确么?不是跟上面这个是同样的问题么? 35% 什么呢?不清楚呀~

In California today, Hispanics under the age of eighteen account for more than 43%, compared with a decade ago, when it was about 35%.

A.In California
today, Hispanics under the age of eighteen account for more than 43%, compared with a decade ago, when it was about 35%

B.Of the Californians under the age of eighteen, today more than 43% of them are Hispanic, compared with a decade ago, when it was about 35%.
C.Today, more than 43% of Californians under the age of eighteen are Hispanic, compared with about 35% decade ago.
D.Today, compared to a decade ago, Californians who are Hispanics under the age of eighteen account for more than 43%, whereas it was about 35%.
E. Today, Hispanics under the age of eighteen in California

account for more than 43%, unlike a decade ago, when it was about 35%.
答案:C


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沙发
发表于 2012-5-10 01:59:45 | 只看该作者
曼哈顿网站上有个人和你有 相同 的问题:也是关于这两道区别的 一摸一样
请戳 这里:
http://www.manhattangmat.com/forums/gmat-question-a-recent-review-of-pay-scales-indicates-t1889-15.html

曼哈顿给的解释是:
you can't just write "42 times" by itself. it has to be 42 times something.
if it's 42 times something that was mentioned previously, or 42 times something that is in parallel structure to something that was mentioned previously, then you could use a relative pronoun (i.e., something like "42 times that in 1990", etc).

but you can't just leave "42 times" hanging out alone.

percentages, on the other hand, can be referenced by themselves (as long as context, somewhere else, clearly indicates what the percent is of).
for instance, you can say "80% of the X's are male, up from 67% five years ago". here, the second percentage is understood to be also "of the X's".

我觉得他说了跟不说一样,



发个水贴!! 我是这么想的

B  选项 不是比较句 去掉 a ratio 就是 比较句 否则 不是比较句。。!!
个人认为没有突出比较 a ratio 做了 前一句话的同位语 关键是多了这个 a ratio 去掉的话 改为 as compared to 42 times  没有 their pay 我觉得也是对的


好吧 我承认不能回答你的问题。。版主呢 呼叫
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2012-5-10 09:51:54 | 只看该作者
曼哈顿网站上有个人和你有 相同 的问题:也是关于这两道区别的 一摸一样
请戳 这里:
http://www.manhattangmat.com/forums/gmat-question-a-recent-review-of-pay-scales-indicates-t1889-15.html

曼哈顿给的解释是:
you can't just write "42 times" by itself. it has to be 42 times something.
if it's 42 times something that was mentioned previously, or 42 times something that is in parallel structure to something that was mentioned previously, then you could use a relative pronoun (i.e., something like "42 times that in 1990", etc).

but you can't just leave "42 times" hanging out alone.

percentages, on the other hand, can be referenced by themselves (as long as context, somewhere else, clearly indicates what the percent is of).
for instance, you can say "80% of the X's are male, up from 67% five years ago". here, the second percentage is understood to be also "of the X's".

我觉得他说了跟不说一样,



发个水贴!! 我是这么想的

B  选项 不是比较句 去掉 a ratio 就是 比较句 否则 不是比较句。。!!
个人认为没有突出比较 a ratio 做了 前一句话的同位语 关键是多了这个 a ratio 去掉的话 改为 as compared to 42 times  没有 their pay 我觉得也是对的


好吧 我承认不能回答你的问题。。版主呢 呼叫
-- by 会员 abc88 (2012/5/10 1:59:45)








谢谢你来回答~~~ 我也觉得第一题的B选项去掉a ratio是可以对的,而把这个a ratio 改为the ratio也是可以对的,这里的a ratio 就指代前面那个419times ~~~比较很明确
呀~B选项compares 不对,应该是compared ,它怎么能主动比较呢?
不知道这里的比较这样想对不对呀?~~
斑斑.......你在哪里???~~~
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2012-5-10 19:28:26 | 只看该作者
呼唤NN们啊~~~~
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-5-12 00:04:23 | 只看该作者
大家不要不理我啊~~~~
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发表于 2012-5-12 11:05:36 | 只看该作者
个人写题思路,仅供参考。。。语意逻辑至上·
1.A recent review of pay scales indicates that CEO’s now earn an average of 419 times more pay than blue-collar workers, compared to a ratio of 42 times in 1980.

A. that CEO’s now earn an average of 419 times more pay than blue-collar workers, compared to a ratio of 42 times
主要还是比较概念不对等的问题。 419 times more pay than blue-collar workers与a ratio of 42 times工资数和比率比较不对
B.that, on average, CEO’s now earn 419 times the pay of blue-collar workers, a ratio that compares to 42 times, a ratio that compares to 42 times
这个我不是很确定,有的人说compare不能有主动态,而要用被动态,因为不是主动去比较。估计是对的吧。而且后面没划线的介词短语,我独来读去都有修饰compares的歧义。所以逻辑不合理。
C.
that, on average, CEO’s now earn 419 times the pay of blue-collar workers, as compared to 42 times their pay, the ratio

这个比较概念就很对等了419 times the pay和42times their pay.



2.In California today, Hispanics under the age of eighteen account for more than 43%, compared with a decade ago, when it was about 35%.

A.In California
today, Hispanics under the age of eighteen account for more than 43%, compared with a decade ago, when it was about 35%
B.Of the Californians under the age of eighteen, today more than 43% of them are Hispanic, compared with a decade ago, when it was about 35%.
C.Today, more than 43% of Californians under the age of eighteen are Hispanic, compared with about 35% decade ago.
这里不是省略么,compared with about 35% of Californians under the age of eighteen are Hispanic,所以指代很明确啊~~~
D.Today, compared to a decade ago, Californians who are Hispanics under the age of eighteen account for more than 43%, whereas it was about 35%.
E. Today, Hispanics under the age of eighteen in California

account for more than 43%, unlike a decade ago, when it was about 35%.
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-5-12 17:30:21 | 只看该作者
个人写题思路,仅供参考。。。语意逻辑至上·
1.A recent review of pay scales indicates that CEO’s now earn an average of 419 times more pay than blue-collar workers, compared to a ratio of 42 times in 1980.

A. that CEO’s now earn an average of 419 times more pay than blue-collar workers, compared to a ratio of 42 times
主要还是比较概念不对等的问题。 419 times more pay than blue-collar workers与a ratio of 42 times工资数和比率比较不对
B.that, on average, CEO’s now earn 419 times the pay of blue-collar workers, a ratio that compares to 42 times, a ratio that compares to 42 times
这个我不是很确定,有的人说compare不能有主动态,而要用被动态,因为不是主动去比较。估计是对的吧。而且后面没划线的介词短语,我独来读去都有修饰compares的歧义。所以逻辑不合理。
C.
that, on average, CEO’s now earn 419 times the pay of blue-collar workers, as compared to 42 times their pay, the ratio

这个比较概念就很对等了419 times the pay和42times their pay.



2.In California today, Hispanics under the age of eighteen account for more than 43%, compared with a decade ago, when it was about 35%.

A.In California
today, Hispanics under the age of eighteen account for more than 43%, compared with a decade ago, when it was about 35%
B.Of the Californians under the age of eighteen, today more than 43% of them are Hispanic, compared with a decade ago, when it was about 35%.
C.Today, more than 43% of Californians under the age of eighteen are Hispanic, compared with about 35% decade ago.
这里不是省略么,compared with about 35% of Californians under the age of eighteen are Hispanic,所以指代很明确啊~~~
D.Today, compared to a decade ago, Californians who are Hispanics under the age of eighteen account for more than 43%, whereas it was about 35%.
E. Today, Hispanics under the age of eighteen in California

account for more than 43%, unlike a decade ago, when it was about 35%.
-- by 会员 单调唱 (2012/5/12 11:05:36)







谢谢NN~~解释的很好~~

那么第一题的B选项如果改成.....,
compared to 42 times in 1980可不可以对呢?可不可以看成是compared to 42 times (the pay of blue workers)呢?

作为一个non-native speaker,比较问题真让人头疼。。。。 
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-5-12 17:49:53 | 只看该作者
跪求斑斑出面解释一下啊!!!这个问题实在是让我不敢忽视又弄不清楚啊!!!
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发表于 2012-5-13 00:39:44 | 只看该作者
给你顶顶~
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-5-13 10:21:54 | 只看该作者
给你顶顶~
-- by 会员 秋晨小仔 (2012/5/13 0:39:44)






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