Chosen作文贴，求批改求监督呢～

nearby_chosen · 发表于 2013-11-11 12:39:29

写作小分队各位好～
匆忙报了12.21的考试，这段时间课也很多，不过一定会坚持的！
先开贴，晚上来贴作文 ;)
(其实并不了解规则……)
momoda~

nearby_chosen · 发表于 2013-11-24 20:25:53

It's better to make wrong decision than make no decision

There can always be a dilemma that make us feel confused. Stucked in several choices, we invariably bother with the pros and cons between choices and hesitate to make the decision. In this situation, I consider it is better to make a wrong decision than make no decision, provided that you cannot figure out the right one at all.

There's no denial that one should considerate thoroughly before decide to decline waste and hurt from failure. However, in society with fierce competition, almost everything are changing fast. If we stop wandering and making no decision at all, we may fall behind. For instance, in a job market, a graduate who acted fast to contact the employer get more chance to be hired than one who hesitated too much and stayed at the starting point.

For a man in the prime, we enjoy the advantage to try and create our future. Wrong decision help us to exclude a wrong way and to learn things from practice. No one success at one stroke, Steve Jobs is definitely a genius but he has bumpy way along the path of erecting Apple kingdom. Wrong decisions help him to crab customers' eyeballs accurately and run his company more efficiently.

The best choice is not always explicit and even definite. Not all decisions you made can be identified instantly whether they are right or wrong. Some decisions could be right in long term by seemingly wrong in short term. How do you define study abroad after graduate? Most people might reckon it a waste of time and money and a runaway from reality. Meanwhile, others consider it as a rare chance to gain knowledge and experience so that they can graduate to a superior level.

All considered, making no decision usually leads to marching on the spot without progress, while making wrong decision instead provide us information to exclude inefficient action from learning in a hard way and increase the probability to pick up the right one next time.

希望小伙伴们走过路过给提个意见T－T
作文是死穴呢！

nearby_chosen · 发表于 2013-11-24 21:13:12

11.23独立
University students should not be required to attend classes. Instead, they should be able to receive credits through a final test or paper.

Have you ever been absent to a class? Anyway, I do. University students are exposed to more choices from which they can gain knowledge nowadays. Subsequently, fierce debates on whether attendance to classes is neccessary for receiving credit are brought up. i consider it essential to attend classes for university student instead of gaining credit with merely a final test or paper.

From my perspective, elementary and constructional knowledge of a subject can be acquired in class with professors introducing the efficient method. To enter a new field of study is like to master a language, we have to learn its pronunciation and grammar. In classes, this can be taught in an efficient and accurate way by professors. Time can thus be saved.

Let alone the benefit from efficient study, the process of study and interaction with professors and classmates is what I appreciated most. Take my economics classes for example, when learning a new concept, our professor try to tell us its up-to-date appliance; when solving a problem, I can take advise from my classmates; when doing case studies, we debate on the best solution. These experience can never be obtained without attending classes.

On the other hand, it's the ability to practice, not the arbitrary decision from the result of final test or paper illustrate students' mastery of the knowledge. A final test or paper usually failed to examine a student comprehensively.

Although divergent choice can be picked by university students which may consequently lead to diversity of college life, attending classes enables us to learn knowledge in an efficient way, to gain valuable study experiences and to present your mastery of knowledge comprehensively. Thus I reinforce that university students should be required to attend classes, and credit should not be received through merely a final test or paper.

nearby_chosen · 发表于 2013-11-26 00:42:44

11.25
Parents should give school-age children money as a reward for getting a high mark in school

Education on school-age children has gained increasing attention. Parents spare no efforts to encourage their children to work hard. One of the most renowned and widespread way is to give them money. Some consider it dangerous, others reckon it effective. I am for the latter.

Money is typically a double-edged sword. However, there is no way around the fact that, money reward is one of the best incentives for school-age children to get high marks. One of my best friend Tony who usually ranked top 10 in exams once whispered to me:" I get 10 bucks everytime I do well in exams," I was surprised and he continued" that's why I can afford that marvelous bicycle!" Tony erected the belief that "People have to gain things with their own hand" through the circulation of working hard for money reward. How could parents resist such a beneficial method.

To come up with, reward children who get a high mark in school have extraordinary benefits besides motivation. That is business sense. Business minded children are invariably maturer than peers and more competitive when they grow up. With parent's careful guide, children can learn how to " earn " money, how to take care of it and how to properlyy use it. These are lessons hard to teach.

There is no denial that the abuse of money reward incentive can lead to children misunderstanding that money is the only object worth fighting for. And without proper restriction, children may waste money at their wish. Nevertheless, I still advocate that parents should give school-age children money as reward for getting a high mark in school for I can ignore the efficiency and special benefit brought by this method.

evolanna · 发表于 2013-11-28 21:53:03

小伙伴不好意思哈，现在才修改。。。最近太忙了。。

krystalgo · 发表于 2013-11-28 22:39:41

不好意思啊，小伙伴，最近赶上申请季，并且还在刷分，都差点给忘了，你的修改好了，我的还没写```回头再上传吧，谢谢了，不好意思啊~~~~~

nearby_chosen · 发表于 2013-11-29 14:58:30

krystalgo 发表于 2013-11-28 22:39
不好意思啊，小伙伴，最近赶上申请季，并且还在刷分，都差点给忘了，你的修改好了，我的还没写```回头再上 ...

谢谢！！！申请加油！！！

nearby_chosen · 发表于 2013-11-29 15:01:52

evolanna 发表于 2013-11-28 21:53
小伙伴不好意思哈，现在才修改。。。最近太忙了。。

最近大家都好忙啊，我也好久没上来了，辛苦啦 >3<

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