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发表于 2013-10-30 23:30:59 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
Doyou agree or disagree with the following statement? The effective leader triesto make others feel they have been part of a decision



Leaders play an important role in theteamwork. They are the backbone of the team. A wise leader could enable companyto make more profit. But what feature should an effective leader have- Kind,work hard, optimistic and so on. But in my point of view, make others feel theyhave been part of a decision is not one of them. It is nothing but a kind of wasting time and it is meaningless.

To begin whether take part in the decisionwill not affect the work ,take bees as an example, most of the bees just dowhat they were told to such as take care of babies , make sure the secure if homeor search for foods. They even have no idea what the meaning of their work, butthey still make an excellent job and, thanks to this work pattern, Bees arealso very efficient. This theory also works on the company.


Furthermore, it will waste a lot of time tolet everyone participate in. Imaging how long would it take to face everyoneneeds. Whereas it might took only one minute for an impressive leader to makethe decision. Time is gold. It might be true that the discussion could bring abetter idea. But the 'better idea’ just can't compensate the value of the timethat it might take. Moreover in the most of situation, what the understrappersuggested are limited by their major.


Finally, the advice of the staffs can'ttake care of the whole task. There is no denying that the staffs are the expertson their own field. But as a decision of the whole group, it should contain alot of aspects while most of them can only give the advice that benefit themselvesmost. For instance, you work at the marketing department, you might hope thatthe budget of advertisement could be raised, and the accounting might have anadverse idea.



For all the reasons above, i thought there is no need to let all the members participate in the decission. it cannot bring more benefit to the company and also time consuming. As efficitive leader they should learn to make decision by themselves  

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沙发
发表于 2013-10-30 23:58:51 | 只看该作者
麻烦 以后单独开一个帖子 每次作业都放在一个帖子里
不要写一次就重新发一个帖子
谢谢配合
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2013-10-31 00:06:30 | 只看该作者
超级无敌小鹤鹤 发表于 2013-10-30 23:58
麻烦 以后单独开一个帖子 每次作业都放在一个帖子里
不要写一次就重新发一个帖子
谢谢配合 ...

哦哦,不好意思,之后就都用这个帖子了。。。。。。。。不一直新开了。。。。。。。。
地板
发表于 2013-10-31 00:12:35 | 只看该作者
用户名已被注册 发表于 2013-10-31 00:06
哦哦,不好意思,之后就都用这个帖子了。。。。。。。。不一直新开了。。。。。。。。 ...

嗯嗯 主要是开新帖的话 不方便改的同学找
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发表于 2013-10-31 10:44:56 | 只看该作者
10.29 独立写作,已批改



第一次帮别人改作文,如有不当之处请指出,以便我们继续交流和互相改进,谢谢小伙伴了!~~

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发表于 2013-10-31 10:46:48 | 只看该作者
小伙伴,我帮你改好了哦!也是建议你以后就开一个属于自己的作文贴,方便别人更方便你自己哦!
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-10-31 12:41:10 | 只看该作者
blackjack201303 发表于 2013-10-31 10:46
小伙伴,我帮你改好了哦!也是建议你以后就开一个属于自己的作文贴,方便别人更方便你自己哦! ...

同学,问一下~有没有什么办法能够提升一下我的句子表达水平的。。。。。。
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-10-31 22:06:27 | 只看该作者
10.30独立写作

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Twenty years from now, students will
no longer use printed books.

Nowadays, an increasing number of people tend to enjoy the book through electronic equipment such as cellphone, computer ipad. At the same time the printed books are facing being weed out. There is no denying that it once played an important role in our life, but with the development of technology, the printed books will being took by e-books completely.   

To begin with printed books are expensive. Take me as an example, student like i am, doing part-time job to make money, prefer to e-books to save money. The printed books are too expensive to afford. A dictionary might need more than $40 while the app only spent me $5 to buy it. Some people might argue that borrow books from libraries only took a little money. But it also brought another problem out. The printed books are too heavy to carry.  


Furthermore, e-books are more convenient to take along. Students might need a lot of reference books to finish the paper. The books would be too heavy to take back to home. Whereas a computer is all what e-books needs. And the network enables us to download the book we wanted anywhere anytime. We also can share books or resources with friends and never worried about the date due for returen.
  

Finally e-books are more environmental friendly. Printed books are made from trees. Since the lost of forest have already course a lot of environment problem, we should cut down the number of the books that printed each year. And e-books are perfect substitution of printed books, they can be copied and deleted almost without wasting resource.


As a conclusion, Printed books didn’t suit the modern life anymore and also do hard to the earth. So as far as I am concerned the popular if the e-books have already sentenced the wane of printed books.
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发表于 2013-11-1 08:25:35 | 只看该作者
用户名已被注册 发表于 2013-10-31 12:41
同学,问一下~有没有什么办法能够提升一下我的句子表达水平的。。。。。。 ...

哦哦,名人事迹,That may make sense. 个人觉得,只要了解美国人的遣词造句习惯的话,还有单词要用的准确(所以词汇还是很重要的,推荐可以看无老师的七天单词,都是精华很常用的单词),平时看阅读的时候可以注意下长句子,基本上就可以了。我觉得他们基本是以第三人称为主,很少用第一和第二,而且多用被动语态,或者ing和ed作状语从句,而且他们很喜欢把很多意思都揉在一个句子里,很喜欢那种一口气表达很多东西的赶脚。个人的一点领悟呵呵!
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发表于 2013-11-1 15:01:34 | 只看该作者
用户名已被注册 发表于 2013-10-31 22:06
10.30独立写作

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Twenty years from now, student ...

10月30号 独立写作已改



里面有些句子我也不太懂,所以改的结果可能有错。我们可以交流一下哈!多多指教!

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