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TWE002,第三篇了,请GGJJ拍砖:)

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发表于 2005-1-5 14:03:00 | 只看该作者

TWE002,第三篇了,请GGJJ拍砖:)

Parents are the best teacher.



In our daily life, sometimes we are confronted with such issue as to whether parents are the best teacher or not. People provide various responses. As far as I am concerned, I hold the idea that parents are best teacher. In this article, I will elaborate my reasons as follows.






The most pertinent reason for my view relies on the fact that from childhood to adulthood, we are surrounded by parents who keep teaching knowledge ranging from how to put on clothes to how to go skiing. It is most important and valuable for us, in more senses than one, to have been cultivated by parents.






The second reason I would present is that parents is the person who knows us best. After more than ten yeas of living together, parents know what is my favorite food and the book that interests me most. When I was forced to tear because of unsatisfactory score for physics, parents always know how to console me and encourage me for tomorrow. Due to this fact, parents will always give us the best advise during our hardship.






It goes without saying that parents may mislead us because of the deep love for us. They may persuade us to give up an exciting trip to explore the myth of mountain, for they deem it is harmful. Nevertheless, parents give more advisable tips than anyone else, for they know us best and are the one who cares us most.





All in all, taking into account the above mentioned, which is convincing and persuasive, I maintained that parents are the best teacher in our life. Parents are not only our best teacher but also our best friend.

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发表于 2005-1-6 06:15:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用katherine8110在2005-1-5 14:03:00的发言:

Parents are the best teacher.



In our daily life, sometimes we are confronted with such issue as to whether parents are the best teacher or not. People provide various responses. As far as I am concerned, I hold the idea that parents are best teacher. In this article, I will elaborate my reasons as follows.






The most pertinent reason for my view relies on the fact that from childhood to adulthood, we are surrounded by parents who keep teaching knowledge ranging from how to put on clothes to how to go skiing. It is most important and valuable for us, in more senses than one, to have been cultivated by parents. 老天爷, 这个句子真的看不懂






The second reason I would present is that parents is the person who knows us best. After more than ten yeas of living together, parents know what is my favorite food and the book that interests me most. When I was forced to tear because of unsatisfactory score for physics, parents always know how to console me and encourage me for tomorrow. Due to this fact, parents will always give us the best advise during our hardship.






It goes without saying that parents may mislead us because of the deep love for us. They may persuade us to give up an exciting trip to explore the myth of mountain, for they deem it is harmful. Nevertheless, parents give more advisable tips than anyone else, for they know us best and are the one who cares us most.





All in all, taking into account the above mentioned, which is convincing and persuasive, I maintained that parents are the best teacher in our life. Parents are not only our best teacher but also our best friend.



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