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twe027-第一次发贴,请大家多指教,不怕被拍砖,准备好了!(modified by hncsxj, required by pumkin:))

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发表于 2004-12-21 16:19:00 | 只看该作者

twe027-第一次发贴,请大家多指教,不怕被拍砖,准备好了!(modified by hncsxj, required by pumkin:))

27. People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Agree or disagree?



This debate has long time been in the limelight. Someone think people need not do things that they do not like doing, but other ones believe that people sometimes should do things that they do not enjoy doing. After pondering two sides of the debate, I deem that the second view is much more appreciated, and even all of the following reasons support me.






The first is that we can not always do things that we want to do, because some other factors such as people surrounding us and social responsibilities will affect us. Children enjoy playing games that they want to do, but they have limited time to play, they should do studies which they think tedious. The same as the children, adults also enjoy playing games and they always have much wok to do, so they have no time to play the games. If they spend much time to play the games, they may not complete their work, so their boss may shout at them and their payment will be subtracted.






The other is that sometimes something which must be done is not the thing you enjoy doing. Supposing you are a company manager, one day you should fire someone who disobeys the company’s regulations, but he is your friend. Considering your friendship you want to help him and you also should obey the regulations, at this site, I think you should do the thing firing him that you do not enjoy doing.






Last but not the least, something you do not enjoy now days you can not say you do not like it forever, someday you may love it. For example, you may think dancing is boring and you almost can not understand why your friends fan in it. When they invite you to dance, you always feel awful. After you go with them one more time, you may fall in love it, and then you request your friends to go with you.






Considering what I have illustrate above, we can not always do things that we want to do, sometimes something which must be done is not the thing you enjoy doing, and something you do not enjoy now days you can not say you do not like it forever, I believe that People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing.   







沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2004-12-22 14:17:00 | 只看该作者
为什么没有人帮我修改呢?
板凳
发表于 2004-12-24 05:34:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用numberX在2004-12-22 14:17:00的发言:
为什么没有人帮我修改呢?


可以试试给人家修改吧。 互相帮助吧。
地板
发表于 2004-12-24 05:44:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用numberX在2004-12-21 16:19:00的发言:

27. People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Agree or disagree?



This debate has long time been in the limelight. Someone think people need not do things that they do not like doing, but other ones believe that people sometimes should do things that they do not enjoy doing. After pondering two sides of the debate, I deem that the second view is much more appreciated, and even all of the following reasons support me.






The first is that we can not always do things that we want to do, because some other factors such as people surrounding us and social responsibilities will affect us. Children enjoy playing games that they want to do, but they have limited time to play, they should do studies which they think tedious. The same as the children, adults also enjoy playing games and they always have much wok to do, so they have no time to play the games. If they spend much time to play the games, they may not complete their work, so their boss may shout at them and their payment will be subtracted.






The other is that sometimes something which must be done is not the thing you enjoy doing. Supposing you are a company manager, one day you should fire someone who disobeys the company’s regulations, but he is your friend. Considering your friendship you want to help him and you also should obey the regulations, at this site, I think you should do the thing firing him that you do not enjoy doing.






Last but not the least, something you do not enjoy now days you can not say you do not like it forever, someday you may love it. For example, you may think dancing is boring and you almost can not understand why your friends fan in it. When they invite you to dance, you always feel awful. After you go with them one more time, you may fall in love it, and then you request your friends to go with you.






Considering what I have illustrate above, we can not always do things that we want to do, sometimes something which must be done is not the thing you enjoy doing, and something you do not enjoy now days you can not say you do not like it forever, I believe that People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing.   








语法错误很多啊,这位姐姐。 先放在WORD里面查一下吧。
5#
发表于 2004-12-27 18:40:00 | 只看该作者
不敢改哦,怕你打我
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