题目：Patience is usually not a good strategy. We should take action now rather than later.
In this day and age, there is a heated discussion about how to deal with our things when we face them. Some people believe that be patience is usually not a good strategy because we may lose the chances when we spend much time thinking, while others think that being patience is very important for people to make key decisions. As far as I am concerned, I support the second point.
First and foremost, when I face a problem and try to solve it, I should know that not anything can give me one more chance to change my mind. If I make the decision quickly without thinking carefully, I may use up my only one chance and the problem may be not solved finally. Think it over and make a sound decision will help me increase the possibility of succeeding.
In addition, patience is a virtue that can be cultivated and nurtured over time. Being patience is a good habit so that people can be more positively in their lives. With the high level of possibility of succeeding, we will be more and more confident to ourselves. Just like my older sister, she is patient to her work and take her work carefully. Her manager is satisfied with her and assigns her to many chances to improve. My sister becomes more efficient and patient.
Admittedly, taking action early can help people get more chances to be successful. With the development of the country, the competition is fierce. Many people attempt to improve themselves and gain access to success. If we pay more time to think about it, we may lose the chance quickly because someone has prepared earlier than us. However, patient is what we must be. Withour being patience, we will lose more chances because we will make more mistakes and waste more time to remove our mistakes.
In my opinion, patience is a good strategy and people should take action after thinking about their problems carefully. Only in this way can we succeed easier.
11.14独立 Contributes on an enjoyable vacation, please select one of three selection. Good food, good location and with good friends to travel.
It is a very significant decision to select a best and suitable selection to enjoy my favorite vation. With heavy load and stress, I really want to travel with my good friends to both relax myself and release myself.
First of all, I am too busy to join some parties with my friends. So we have little time to share funny experience and get together. Friend is an important part in my life, so I think it is necessary to spend a lot of time communicating with my friends. When we go on a trip, we can take photos, see the beautiful scenery and know more about each other. For instance, once I made a special plan to travel around the sea. I asked three of my friends to take part in this plan and we took a week to travel. Even though we had been such good friends, we knew about each other better than before.
In addition, I can also share happiness with my friends when we travel together. My friends can always bring exciting and interesting stories to me. It helps me forget my stress and come to be real of myself again. Unhealthy method can be removed so that I am covered with happiness. Just like something personal which I do not tell others who I cannot trust, but I can talk to my friends. Some problems can be solved quickly. Admittedly, good food and good location can satisfy my demand of material, yet they cannot meet my requirement of spirit.
Last but not least, when we get into trouble on the travelling, we can discuss how to solve this problem better. We can help and take care of each other without feeling lonely. To go on a enjoyable vacation, it is necessary to ask some good friends to travel.
As far as I am concerned, travel with good friends can bring me much more happy things. Good food can satisfy my stomach, good location can give me a warm home, however, good trip with friends can bring me a enjoyable vacation. Only in this way can I believe that this vacation is deserved and valuable.
It is a very significant （significant就好）decision to select a best and suitable selection （感觉表达上好像有点不合适啊~）to enjoy my favorite vation. With heavy load and stress, I really want to travel with my good friends to both relax myself and release myself.（怎么说呢，我觉得这段最好结合题目，提到一下，other factors表达作者的观点，感觉会更切题~）
First of all, I am too busy to join some parties with my friends. So we have little time to share funny experience and get together. Friend is an important part in my life, so I think it is necessary to spend a lot of time communicating with my friends. When we go on a trip, we can take photos, see the beautiful scenery and know more about each other. For instance, once I made a special plan to travel around the sea. I asked three of my friends to take part in this plan and we took a week to travel. Even though we had been such good friends, we knew about each other better than before.（段首第一句最好是段落的主旨句，比如这里可以写having good friends in vacation, we can share funny experience together thus enhance our friendship.后面再展开说原因，这样字数也会多些。下面的段同理）
In addition, I can also share happiness with my friends when we travel together. My friends can always bring exciting and interesting stories to me. It helps me forget my stress and come to be real of myself again. Unhealthy method can be removed so that I am covered with happiness. Just like something personal which I do not tell others who I cannot trust, but I can talk to my friends. Some problems can be solved quickly. Admittedly, good food and good location can satisfy my demand of material, yet they cannot meet my requirement of spirit. （同理。感觉大意还是表达了的）
Last but not least, when we get into trouble on the travelling, we can discuss how to solve this problem better. We can help and take care of each other without feeling lonely（好像串了）. To go on a enjoyable vacation, it is necessary to ask some good friends to travel. （这个point我觉得很好，展开点说哦~）
As far as I am concerned, travel with good friends can bring me much more happy things. Good food can satisfy my stomach, good location can give me a warm home, however, good trip with friends can bring me a enjoyable vacation. Only in this way can I believe that this vacation is deserved and valuable.（最后一段大意是好的，表达上可以参考一下其他文章~）多多包涵！
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发表于 2012-11-13 13:53:10
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