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苗苗心圃G

It is a very significant （significant就好）decision to select a best and suitable selection （感觉表达上好像有点不合适啊~）to enjoy my favorite vation. With heavy load and stress, I really want to travel with my good friends to both relax myself and release myself.（怎么说呢，我觉得这段最好结合题目，提到一下，other factors表达作者的观点，感觉会更切题~）

First of all, I am too busy to join some parties with my friends. So we have little time to share funny experience and get together. Friend is an important part in my life, so I think it is necessary to spend a lot of time communicating with my friends. When we go on a trip, we can take photos, see the beautiful scenery and know more about each other. For instance, once I made a special plan to travel around the sea. I asked three of my friends to take part in this plan and we took a week to travel. Even though we had been such good friends, we knew about each other better than before.（段首第一句最好是段落的主旨句，比如这里可以写having good friends in vacation, we can share funny experience together thus enhance our friendship.后面再展开说原因，这样字数也会多些。下面的段同理）

In addition, I can also share happiness with my friends when we travel together. My friends can always bring exciting and interesting stories to me. It helps me forget my stress and come to be real of myself again. Unhealthy method can be removed so that I am covered with happiness. Just like something personal which I do not tell others who I cannot trust, but I can talk to my friends. Some problems can be solved quickly. Admittedly, good food and good location can satisfy my demand of material, yet they cannot meet my requirement of spirit. （同理。感觉大意还是表达了的）

Last but not least, when we get into trouble on the travelling, we can discuss how to solve this problem better. We can help and take care of each other without feeling lonely（好像串了）. To go on a enjoyable vacation, it is necessary to ask some good friends to travel. （这个point我觉得很好，展开点说哦~）

As far as I am concerned, travel with good friends can bring me much more happy things. Good food can satisfy my stomach, good location can give me a warm home, however, good trip with friends can bring me a enjoyable vacation. Only in this way can I believe that this vacation is deserved and valuable.（最后一段大意是好的，表达上可以参考一下其他文章~）多多包涵！

-- by 会员 pennywu20 (2012/11/15 10:31:03)

非常感谢！

苗苗心圃G

12月6日 写作小分队

独立：大学生是否不必到学校上课，只要参加考试就行了？
To meet the requirment of completely development of cities, people pay more attention on studying in universities. They still believe that more knowledge will help them get good jobs and make much more money. The most important thing is that the development of technology can bring benefits to the world to make them enjoy better lives. So some of them hold that students should study hard in the universities and go to classes on time. However, others dispute this idea because they think that it is not useful of that knowledge in the universities so that students do not have to learn and just finish their exams. In my opinion, I agree with the first opinion with the following reasons.

First of all, students can exercise themselves through learning much knowledge and skills. Lots of companies focus on employees` special skills and whole abilities. If students do not study hard in the universities, they will not improve themselves. Just like my teacher, Mr. Zhang, he majored in English in his university. Once he told me that he studied harder than other students so that he often got high grade in his exams. Through studying in the classes, he learnt much knowledge from his teacher and had a lot of interest in English. After all, he found a satisfied job which he really likes.


What is more, when students study in the classes, they can get more chances to talk with their teacher to get more experience. I state that communicating with teachers is significant and necessary to students because teachers` achievement and special experience can enlarge students` scope of view and broaden students` horizon. For instance, Mr. Zhang would like to tell some stories he occurred to us. These stories reflect some important meanings of life. We learnt how to take good care of ourselves and how to insist on our plans and dreams. It is really helpful and useful to us.

Admittedly, some people indicate that the knowledge with students learn has nothing to do with students` future jobs, but they ignore the point that students can not only learn knowledge in the classes, but also improve themselves in the classes. If they just do exam in the universities, they only get proof which proves their existence in the unviersities. They would waste a sea of money and time.


As far as I am concerned, students should take classes in the universities. In addition, it is beneficial and essential for them to develop their future and get good jobs. Only in this way can they realize their value in their universities.