请教语法题，有关with的用法和独立主格。。。

aimee09 · 发表于 2012-10-20 21:08:43

241.
Despite protests from some waste-disposal companies, state health officials have ordered the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches to be measured and that the results be published.

(A) the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches to be measured and that the results be

(B) that seawater at popular beaches should be measured for their levels of bacteria, with the results being

(C) the measure of levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches and the results to be

(D) seawater measured at popular beaches for levels of bacteria, with their results

(E) that the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches be measured and the results

正确：E

请问可以吧B选项的with短语看做独立主格吗？B的错误在哪？谢谢！

sisichen666 · 发表于 2012-10-20 21:21:37

简单理解下，原文含义是and并列，而with是伴随修饰，改变原文逻辑含义

DUKB24 · 发表于 2012-10-20 21:34:47

241.
Despite protests from some waste-disposal companies, state health officials have ordered the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches to be measured and that the results be published.

(A) the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches to be measured and that the results be

(B) that seawater at popular beaches should be measured for their levels of bacteria, with the results being

(C) the measure of levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches and the results to be

(D) seawater measured at popular beaches for levels of bacteria, with their results

(E) that the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches be measured and the results

正确：E

请问可以吧B选项的with短语看做独立主格吗？B的错误在哪？谢谢！

-- by 会员 aimee09 (2012/10/20 21:08:43)

you should remember that parallelism is the most effective weapon to deal with SC problems

just determine which part should be parallel and eliminate other choices with faulty or non-existent parallelim

you see the contrast present in the sentence

1. the protest from those waste-disposal companies

just brain-strom a while

what should there be a protest？ for what？there muse be something bad ，at least for those company

what？measures of .... as well as the publish ....these two things are actually hurting those companies

they should be put in parallel form (either noun, verb or clause)

B can be easily knocked out for non-exsistent parallelism

aimee09 · 发表于 2012-10-20 23:40:37

241.
Despite protests from some waste-disposal companies, state health officials have ordered the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches to be measured and that the results be published.

(A) the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches to be measured and that the results be

(B) that seawater at popular beaches should be measured for their levels of bacteria, with the results being

(C) the measure of levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches and the results to be

(D) seawater measured at popular beaches for levels of bacteria, with their results

(E) that the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches be measured and the results

正确：E

请问可以吧B选项的with短语看做独立主格吗？B的错误在哪？谢谢！

-- by 会员 aimee09 (2012/10/20 21:08:43)

you should remember that parallelism is the most effective weapon to deal with SC problems

just determine which part should be parallel and eliminate other choices with faulty or non-existent parallelim

you see the contrast present in the sentence

1. the protest from those waste-disposal companies

just brain-strom a while

what should there be a protest？ for what？there muse be something bad ，at least for those company

what？measures of .... as well as the publish ....these two things are actually hurting those companies

they should be put in parallel form (either noun, verb or clause)

B can be easily knocked out for non-exsistent parallelism

-- by 会员 DUKB24 (2012/10/20 21:34:47)

谢谢！！也就是说parallelism>absolute phrases了？还是说以句意为根据呢？我总觉得measure和publish之间有一种递进的感觉，并不是完全平行。。可能是我自己的问题吧。。

DUKB24 · 发表于 2012-10-20 23:47:04

241.
Despite protests from some waste-disposal companies, state health officials have ordered the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches to be measured and that the results be published.

(A) the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches to be measured and that the results be

(B) that seawater at popular beaches should be measured for their levels of bacteria, with the results being

(C) the measure of levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches and the results to be

(D) seawater measured at popular beaches for levels of bacteria, with their results

(E) that the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches be measured and the results

正确：E

请问可以吧B选项的with短语看做独立主格吗？B的错误在哪？谢谢！

-- by 会员 aimee09 (2012/10/20 21:08:43)

you should remember that parallelism is the most effective weapon to deal with SC problems

just determine which part should be parallel and eliminate other choices with faulty or non-existent parallelim

you see the contrast present in the sentence

1. the protest from those waste-disposal companies

just brain-strom a while

what should there be a protest？ for what？there muse be something bad ，at least for those company

what？measures of .... as well as the publish ....these two things are actually hurting those companies

they should be put in parallel form (either noun, verb or clause)

B can be easily knocked out for non-exsistent parallelism

-- by 会员 DUKB24 (2012/10/20 21:34:47)

谢谢！！也就是说parallelism>absolute phrases了？还是说以句意为根据呢？我总觉得measure和publish之间有一种递进的感觉，并不是完全平行。。可能是我自己的问题吧。。

-- by 会员 aimee09 (2012/10/20 23:40:37)

nope

you should figure out these two sorts of construction are totally different

parallelism is two independent things that are supposed to be parallel

absolute phrase is similar to modifier， actually it always modifies the preceding clause （just providing more information）

you measure and then publish

these are two sequential actions

publish has nothing to do with measures

this case we need parallelism not absolute phrase

aimee09 · 发表于 2012-10-21 00:05:25

非常感谢！终于弄明白啦！

lcy0403 · 发表于 2012-10-21 08:36:26

E 答案是省略了be 吗？ results be published????

DUKB24 · 发表于 2012-10-21 10:21:25

E 答案是省略了be 吗？ results be published????

-- by 会员 lcy0403 (2012/10/21 8:36:26)

yes

command subjuntive

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